I hope this gets update soon

this is a wonderful story, I highly recommend reading this

Wow, that was one hell of a good adaptation of Portal and Worm. It was an excellent read and I will be looking for any omake's or sequels you may have done.

Thanks for posting.

Thank you for writing this! Loved it!

I can't trust this. story, it's probably all delusional dream of Taylor as she slowly dies in her locker.
Cause the cake is a lie, so a real cake means everything is a lie

The overall story was brilliant! I hope your other stories are just as brilliant. Mainly because I'm going to check them out after this. Have a good day.

Damn. I really love this entire series! It was absolutely wonderful! It had the right amount of everything and it always kept me on my toes. That last pairing though did come out of nowhere. I actually thought Taylor and Sammie were going to get together. Heck even if it really stretches it GLaDOS also sounded like a possibility. The pairing you chose came out of left field to be honest. Honestly out of the entire story that's my only gripe.

I don't know why but I just realized out of nowhere that Chell was a part of the bringer daughter to work day in Cannon. It looks like the main character of the portal games still somehow got into the story as a piece of Sam/curiosity. That actually is pretty clever and interesting if it was on purpose. Our favorite mute in a roundabout way was one of the main characters still. Holy crap curiosity helped Taylor finish all the puzzles. Wow even in Another Universe in another roundabout way of life Chell is still messing about with portals and testing. Amazing job overall.

Honestly, I would have put money on Taylor/Sammie than Taylor/Chris. The Kid came out of nowhere.

For the small amount of chapters this was, it was a really intense, and eventually heartwarming story. It leaves a lot of things in question when it comes to certain things from canon Worm. I don't know how canon GLaDOS', and the other personality cores', stories here are, but I liked the concept if it's not canon, and I love the conclusion of their story(or at least, this chapter of their story).

YEEEAH BOIIIIII, THAT'S OUR TAYLOR! HAHAHA!

Good old Brockton Bay. Three different major gangs, way too many villains and not enough heros, every day insanity, and portals opening up in school cafeterias to alternate dimensions. Par for the course, I'd say...

Gawt dayum. It goes from interesting story with GLADoS NOT being a psychopath AI, to "oh fuck, now Taylor has to outlast and outthink a fucking ascended biological AI with mass murder and domination on the mind.

I like this one. Not very loyal to Skitter's original personality, but again, this Taylor is not Skitter. I give this 5.5 Aperture Science Victory Celebration Cakes out of 7, with a loss of 1.5 for distancing from canon, both Portal (quite heavily) and Worm (somewhat lightly). Continue Testing

(Also, I think Anger's fanfic should have been written in a more scientific language, since she is a core. Also I think that would be funny)

A story devoid of everyone's favourite citrus fruit... How is Cave Johnson going to develop combustible lemons if you got rid of them all? Joke aside, good story. Thanks for writing.