I have no words except these two: Simply. Incredible! P.S. It seems the cake was not a lie after all!

This was a great read and I really enjoyed it!

my brain shrinks one inch by one inch and i am only on page 4

seriously watts per second/watts per day? watts are unit of power not energy. The unit for energy is called a Joule. 1J 1 Ws or 1W 1J/s. See what the problem is now saying watts per second makrs no sense becouse 1W already is 1 Joule of energy per second.
This doesn't really matter this is a fanfic after all but it still bothers be a littpr but when watts are used as a unit of energy.

Omg, this was such a ride. The last chapter sums it all up wonderfully; giving a nice warm feeling throughout.
Went straight into my favorites, really warmed my heart.

That was way too much fun! I want more, somehow! Maybe have them go back to the Half-Life reality and help Gordon save everybody from the Combine? That could be good times!

wow, what a way to end it, with that last sentence, great way to wrap it all up. I've loved the journey to this point, and can't wait to read more of your stuff. that said, I wouldn't mind some more snippets of these characters interacting, not like a full chapter, but just... gah. My ravenous appetite for mOaR is messing with me, and i don't want to come off like an asshole. So, this story is very obviously complete, but I'd like some more epilog like stuff, perhaps play around some more with the fact that they can realisicly go ANYWHERE in the multiverse with their tech.

I haven't been able to find any highly rated portal fics with a promising premise at all.
This one is great, one other I once read but got abandoned was great, and there ain't much more.
I say congratulations on making such a great piece of art/ a glimpse into another world.

Well the take on the timeline of Aperture Science history here is great.

“Ah... All according to Keikaku”

Great story, going into my Keep For Reading When Feeling Down File.
Thanks for sharing and looking forward to more.

This was truly a triumph. I loved every minute of reading this wonderful story! Thank you for sharing it with all of us! May the muses continue to bless you with their favor! :D

A damn good fic. The wrap-up after the defeat of Osiris was a bit rushed, but the content in that portion was still good. Everything before that? Amazing. The build-up and reveal of how the whole thing happened, piecing the events together, not just of the incident, but of how this version of Aperture differs from canon, the different version of GLaDOS and the cores, it all just worked so well. I was a little put-off when Osiris and co were introduced, but by the end of it I was 100% on board.

I for one would love to see a sequel, seeing the impact Taylor and Aperture have on Earth Bet, and how wildly different events would go would be wicked.

Super impressed,
-Twy

Wait a minute. The goggles were filled with the toxic air the same as the air was. Why did the toxic air in the goggles suddenly become not-toxic by putting them on her face?

Awesome crossover. I had a blast reading this! Everything from the pacing to the changes in PoV to the characterizations, the tinkering...it really fit together and just felt good to read. Osiris made for a great villain too. And the interaction between Aperture tech and Taylor's tinkering was quite entertaining to read, it did a good job of giving an impression of the potential there.
Also Contessa's plan for Alexandria was pure gold, it had to be said.