Story concept is good but ya need work on your English and writing style

Hope you continue this and maybe eventually do a sequel.

This is great work so far. I really like the descriptions you used, they really set the mood you were trying to convey.
I was actually wondering if you wanted to join a discord that a friend of mine owns. It's for writers to share their work, get feedback, and offer tips and stuff. You can actually promote work too, if you're good enough. I think they'd be happy to have you. Here's the invite, if you want to check it out.
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I am... soo sad that I didn't get to watch this when it came out.

Anyway, okay, my thoughts on this... despite not having watched the movie I feel like you've been doing a good job thus far with the story.

Do I wish it was more detailed? Sure but detailed also means drawn out but you've managed to get a good tempo so no complaints there, as for the development of the relationship, maybe a bit more in depth would be good because from chapter 2 it was a love at first kind of thing and sure the time that is actually passing is a lot more than a few days... I guess I just want to see more of the 'why I love her/him even more than i do now' when the next chapter rolls around.

Grammar, not that bad to be honest, it weirdly enough is giving the story a bit more character.

One thing though, just to clarify a bit: at this point how much does Hina know of Naruto's backstory? I know that she might already know a bit but some confirmation would be nice, unless revealing it would be spoiling in which case don't tell.

fast update please. if you can do it

Damn this is good

make it more long please. its good story

next please

Keep up the work k!