Reviews for Of Demons and Slayers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's a small error in the beginning of the chapter: when you first mentioned the Prophet, you named him "Regret" instead of Truth. Other than that, this chapter was phenomenal. Hope to see more in the future! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always a delight to see this update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What kind of gun Doomguy use to melt that Wraith tank? I didn't recognize nor can't find clue about it :3 Anyway, this really cool chapter! I love the part where Doomguy use his trump card BFG! XD Please, next time try making him to use his shotgun more often! Because his not the Demon exterminator without his trusty Combat and Super Shotgun! XD Oh also, maybe in your other Doom story like "Universal DOOM", could you maybe send Doom to other horror, sci-fic, fantasy show or anime? I can you some franchise that will be good canditate for Doomguy to deal with supernatural problem: -Corpse Party -IT -The Lord of the Ringan -UFO Aftermath -Overlord (anime) -Mortal Kombat -Seraph of the End -Terminator -Costantien -Marvel Zombies -Bloodborne -The Thing -Diablo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way the Doom Slayer gets along with Master Chief. I wouldn't be surprised if Doom Slayer's brutal combat style rubbed off on the Master Chief in some way. I wonder how Guilty Spark and VEGA will get along? Is Guilty Spark more advanced in any way? Good job otherwise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm surprised VEGA didn't attempt to subvertly disassemble Guilty Spark |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumb question but what was that beam Weapon the Slayer used |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work man. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter just proves how amazing it is that you can seamlessly fit Doom Slayer into the Halo universe. Keep it up! Hope to see more soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The others are learning. Soon, they too will know what it is to Rip and Tear until it is done. |
![]() ![]() I am excited. Good luck, good fellow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I am glad this developed into its own story arc, but I have complaints with this chapter over the excessive novelization of Halo 3 which I have to skimmed it over. It is way better to NOT novelize like any beginners/rookies who are writing for the first time. (I have the same negative sentiment toward the Dead Space chapter for the same novelization and not breaking canon) So it is best to condense Halo 3 opening and the journey to the Ark to some paragraphs than just blatantly copying the game cutscenes and scripts. Do not novelize in your future writings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MC should be team leader as DS is not leadership material and a hot head. This means MC must butt heads with one other as should Cortana and Vega. Getting DS to socialize and not kill teammates is a full time job if MC is to be team leader |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Definitely following, hoping to see some carnage and destruction. If what I have read in Universal Doom, this should be just as good. By the way, the chapter you posted on Universal Doom to get people over here, is called "The State of Chapter 20" but in the drop down menu for choosing a chapter, the 20th entry is Dead Space. I was a bit confused at first until I realised that the story had interludes so the 20th entry isn't the 20th chapter. Not exactly a big problem, just slightly confusing for people with small minds, like me. |