PLEASE CONTINUE! Honestly, I have nothing else since there's nothing to fix about this fic. Well, aside from the spelling errors. Might want to get that checked.

Also, I have to reiterate that you have one of the best interpretations of the Doom Slayer. I always imagined him to have that stoic, tranquil fury instead of being represented as a raging blood nut.

This makes me REALLY exited for the next chapter, I’ve never heard of of a story getting split off into a different one

Beautiful isn’t it? Praise the emperor!

Man... Doom Slayer is going to have fun with Halo again.
That guy is probably going to be annoyed there are parachutes on those drop pods so it doesn't slam into the ground at terminal velocity. This IS the same guy that basically went into an artillery piece and used himself as the ammo.

Holy mama this is awesome! I can't wait for the next one! This is too crazy! Rip and Tear the Gravemind!

Nice

apologies for forgetting to say you smash it with this first chapter cause you know fuck ONI. looking forward to vega and cortana meeting

please tell me you plan to finish this up then return to the original cause i love now your doing the slayer

VEGA IS A BOSS!

Do you plan to have more multi-chapter stories in what had easy potential to be a full fledged series of the Doom Slayer traveling the Omniverse, killing monsters and growing stronger? That could be quite fun. I love Vega integrating with the Praetor suit and completely bitching ONI with contemptuous ease. This could be quite fun. though I reccomend finishing this before going further with the original or going to further full stories in this burgeoning series. (which was probably your plan but I've seen this kind of thing go off the rails quickly). Good luck!

that was awesome can't wait for the next chapter.