Reviews for These Games We Play
disturbing child 0.1 chapter 2 . 6/28/2005
oh this is really god ...

OH GOD WRITE MOOR PLEAS (sob)
personwithnoname chapter 2 . 9/2/2004
please please please please update soon! :]
lyn chapter 2 . 8/28/2004
are you going to finish
Labyris chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Not bad I liked it quite a bit pleae continue.
a fan of fanfiction chapter 2 . 5/10/2003
Why did Sara agree to this game? Nothing was said about Jareth forcing her to play. Why would she play if she didn't have to and the stakes were so high? I don't think it makes much sense.
NuPreacher chapter 2 . 5/10/2003
To be truthful, all she is known as is the Stepmother. She isn't given a name in the movie or book. Karen is a good enough name. That's the name that is usually chosen by fanfic writers.
Solea chapter 2 . 5/10/2003
Well...first of all this sounds like a great premise and I'm looking forward to seeing what the challenges end up being. Secondly...I hope she loses (tee-hee).
Treedotcom chapter 2 . 5/9/2003
yea...her name's karen...but great job on the first chap!...too bad about those hand cramps...hurry and update soon!...this is really getting good...
terrie chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
ok on with this that was a very good begining something this good its a must to keep going i hope you please do you have hooked me as a wondering read :)

you've got some good work you do
Treedotcom chapter 1 . 5/8/2003
nice nice...ur right it's short but it sets up the mood...i'm very interested in the rest of the story...please continue