Wait a minute, All Might's time limit was around three hours at the start of the series, so why is it only one hour in your story?!

This story has a compelling plot with a hint of mystery mixed in. Can't wait for the next chapter to know what's gonna happen

I kind of wish you didn't mess around with Venom. The original is a hell of a lot more interesting than what you made. You gave him a friend... Yay!...

Well, what'dya know? Looks like the author decided to skip all the "will they, won't they" most highschool romance anime involve. I approve. Izuku is one lucky boy.

Okay I admit this is very kinda what? Yeah hard to put into words, but I like it, aside from the good work you've done.

a personal gripe of mine is listing that Izuku is super smart, yeah he is smart as hell within the top 5 of his class I believe? as well as his analysis abilities, but that doesn't translate to completing a new element and figuring out how to go against gods and figuring out time travel levels of genius.

So yeah it would be like saying cause Bakugo is combat smart he'd also be like Claude Debussy, Wolfgang, Franz liszt, and so on and so forth.

Interesting concept... Read Symbiosis by Megamatt09... Interesting to say the least, A concept regarding symbiotes was on my mind after reading a short lived story on Ao3.

Aside from that then how strong will you make venom? what of his weaknesses? What of his hunger for brain matter?

Actually watch MatPat's theory where Venom is the victim, but it was based on the movies. you know the ones not tom holland and the canon universe was reset(not sure) like 3 times before finally tom holland nailed it?

Awesome!

Yus

and with that, Venom has left the building.

Poor izuku, let's just hope that neither izuku or venom become ravager. And that Himiko and Savage are gonna surprise him with there new hobby or plan.

Holy shnikey, is that girl horny!

Ow my ribs... can't... breathe... laughing... to... hard...

More plz

Hawt. Now I'm bothered.

After 14 chapters though it's time to pick up the pace. No more constant exposition. It's exhausting. Get to the socializing with the rest of the cast. Get on with the plot. This shit that just happened? This all happened in the first 4 episodes of the anime. And you started this story last summer. This kind of pace will make an author get tired of their story. I have seen this happen way too much. It happened to me!

Not everything needs an explanation. Not everything needs to bring everything to a halt so everything and everyone can gawk at it. Let things be and flavor their happenings with gravitas and the charisma of the cast you have at hand.

Do you watch Rick and Morty? If not then do so. Rick only explains enough about the weird stuff that he and his grandson encounter for his grandson to keep up without wasting an episode explaining shit. It's tedious and stops the story.

If you do watch, then think about how Rick deals with people constantly interrupting the adventure to get every question they have answered. Hell! The Pickle Rick episode is the perfect example. Rick interrupts Morty's constant questions with "Stop looking for a deeper meaning to this and just be impressed!"

BE IMPRESSIVE.

We don't need to know everything immediately. Tell your story, but remember the adage to show not tell. Well it's a balance. Tell the boring stuff quickly so you can show the important stuff.

Sorry if I'm ranting and sounding entitled. I just care about your story and your growth as a writer. My quirk is "Too-much-empathy-I-cannot-stop-empathizing-with-other-writers-and-its-driving-me-insane-eat-that-for-long-titles-Aoyama!" It's not very useful.

Good luck with your next chapter. Don't feel like you have to oblige me. Just learn. And grow. And enjoy the process.

HAHAHAHA!