Reviews for Young Wolf |
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![]() ![]() This story is coming off very interesting, nice to see Atreus being closer to Kratos and viceversa, hopefully we will emet rwby!mimir. I'm sad to see you plan to include Jaune in the fic. Yeah, his willpower stat is over 100 but beyond that he is completely fucking useless specially now that whatever little relevance he had has been taken over by Atreus. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, you have another loyal and eager reader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, 2 years, 2 fuppin' years! Being this lazy on a fic is one of the reasons why this site relies stupidly on Chinese ads to pay the very least the rent. Use the GoW wiki if you have to. Though in my head ozpin is not going to like Kratos for being a god-killer, even when in truth oz is a puppet to the God of Light to be another dick god to mankind. |
![]() ![]() I am unsure about this, boy. Atreus would be around 1,000 years old in the modern lands. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun fact, Icelandic is actually the closest thing we have today to the Old Norse language of old, rather than Norwegian. The two are still VERY similar to each other, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am waiting for you to continue this masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As I imagine Atreus's reaction after the Lost Fable reveals: "Raven was right we should never have trusted you, Oz; you manipulated and used us as pawns in a game of chess like you did with thousands of people before us to fight a war against your ex-wife; You sacrificed thousands of people to maintain a stalemate in the war that you yourself caused by wanting to separate a mother from her daughters, etc ... " "Your methods don't make you so different from Salem,Hitler,etc that they will do whatever they think is necessary to achieve their goals" Qrow's: "I believed in you, my team and family believed in you, I can't believe that Raven was right all the time that my trust and my faith in you was blind, you are no different than my father who sacrificed his own men and family to achieve their goal The way I see it, Oz is on the wrong foot of losing his war against his ex-wife Salem. Salem has brought the silver-eyed warriors to the brink of extinction, has made the Grimms have almost the entire territory of the planet to themselves, has developed a method to steal the magic of others (grimm parasite), has created hybrid eyed warriors Silver Plated-Grimm (Hound of volume 8), has cut communications between kingdoms, already has a plan to end the forces of Oz for good. Oz has made the following mistakes that have cost Remmant and his people too much, such as: -Gift most of his magical powers to 4 people without having a method to make sure whoever inherits them is trustworthy or get them back. -Hidden too much crucial information even from his closest allies -He has made Remmant too dependent on his guide and if something happens to him the line of command is almost broken. -He has been too focused on finding a way to destroy Salem that he has not thought of other ways to permanently defeat her such as sealing her, locking her in a pocket dimension (the vaults) or launching her into outer space. My theory of how the Dust originated are 3: -They are a fossil fuel that originated from the remnants of Remmant's first magical humanity. -They are the remains of the moon charged with the magical energy of the god of darkness -They are the crystallized accumulation of magic energy that is in the environment or Remmant's magic ley lines without using it. On the origin of the Aura it seems like a combination of reinforcement and protection spells plus a specialized spell (Semblance) Basically the mission of Oz by the God of light is like the punishment of Sisyphus to push a round rock for eternity until he manages to put it on top of a mountain imposed by Hades (Greek Mythology); but the consequences every time fail are much worse such as: -Death of countless people -Less territory for humanity -Trauma and psychological wounds from countless betrayals -Etc... I also believe that when the God of Light warned Oz to do what he did not to look for Salem, I believe he used the power of Choice as The Eye of Agamotto from the MCU to see the futures that would drive his choice to reunite. with Salem; that's why he warned him that he would only find pain. Another issue is that Oz released all the information of his mission to Salem and what would happen if it failed; Salem basically now seeks a planetary level suicide to break his curse, take revenge on the gods and Oz. Also the methods that Oz uses do not do better than Salem, such as: -Manipulate thousands into fighting almost blindly to face an immortal enemy without a plan to defeat, contain or seal it. -Her lack of a real plan to defeat her and withholding crucial information has resulted in disaster, betrayal, among other countless times. -His objective of accomplishing his mission at all costs has blinded him from his own morality and the costs it has had on the population of Remmant. |
![]() ![]() At V3 I like to imagine a certain axe appearing, slamming into a Grimm in front of Atreus and Kratos appears as the axe returns to his hand as he jumps up smashing the ground with his axe. (Thrown axe, L2 R2) and the duo does incredible combos on various enemies as his classmates watch in awe. The moment where the students meets Kratos, thinking about Atreus’s actions and slightly harsh reasoning and realize that he got it from Kratos. “This makes some sense…” |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update the story anytime soon? Also, minor correction: Atreus’s weapons should be named Lupine Recluse, since Vulpine relates to foxes and Lupine relates to wolves. It’s an easy mistake to make, though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude you this needs an update. |
![]() ![]() Please please please update |
![]() ![]() Please please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Color me interested :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, its so cool... |