I'll say this much. As smart as Will is, he is also an idiot. Of course he will have a visceral reaction to the lie being revealed but his whole reaction of what his future will be was insane. People aren't their parents. His whole thing of putting the Targaryen's back is also misguided if he cares for the people, because the realm suffered under the last one. Summer Isles thing was a little weird not bad. He also speaks in a stilted manner but that's just something to work on writing wise. Overall interesting story but may not be much for me with the number of OCs and a few minor issues. I'll stick with it for a bit though.

When you believe no one gets the reference except the writer. you cringe only yourself
-ti yi Art of war

Amazing chapter thank you for the update

Great chapter, just finished rereading the story and still loving it, though do agree that The Blue Wolf has gotten less attention compared to your others stories, so would like to see it get some more especially given that Will is back in Westeros now and getting closer to the canon storyline.

Looking forward to seeing Cersei and Joffrey realise just how out of depth they are, when they inevitably attempt to steal the throne and the overwhelming majority of The Seven Kingdoms unites behind William, as well as Daenerys' eventual inclusion into Will's lovers.

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*Correction Qohor not Volantis has the finest blacksmith who know how to reforge valyrian steel.

Now that Will is back in Westeros and he’s finally letting all the nobles and people know that now he’s back a lot of things are going to change around the capital and all the kingdoms
i think the biggest changes he can make at court are cleaning up the council positions and with all his new ideas i can see him adding a few more positions to the council and bringing lords that he knows will be loyal to him and be trustworthy enough. The next change should be have Janos Slynt be removed from command of the city watch and replaced with some who turn the city watch into an actual strong army capable of defending the people of King’s Landing. While also having the Kingsguard changed replacing all the knights that do not deserve the honour of wearing the white cloak.
So basically he’ll end up replacing Boros Blount, Meryn Trant and Preston Greenfield. He’ll keep Barristan Selmy because theres no question that no one deserves the white cloak more than him Arys Oakheart because other than Barristan he was the only other Honourable knights on roberts guard. Mandon Moore because he was the most dangerous so Will would see the potential he has and Jaime Lannister because despite all the bad things he did in the end he made the right choices. and he’d find some way to get Pycelle removed from the position of Grand Maester

I absolutely LOVE this story. Its interesting that the King has had absolutely no interest in his two blatantly identical bastard children that are right in front of him. It is another flex to be honest since his ‘legitimate’ kids don’t look or act like him. Ive also been thinking that Jon Snow would be an awesome future lord of moat caitlin. At the very least, he could get a chance to know his brother as a jr northern knight or something. I cant wait to see what lyanna’s kids will come up with in the future!

great chapter really hope that you add the forrester and the whitehills from the telltale game.

I liked this chapter. The Grand Melee, especially the fight between Will and the Mountain was epic!
Plus how it shows that Cersei is becoming more unstable mentally and emotionally as her attempts on her stepson’s life keep failing. As for who Will should end up with I suggest Margaery. As it’s stated in the show and other fan fiction that Catelyn and Ned didn’t love each other at first, but did so eventually. I seems to me the Will and Margaery have come to understand each other and they can build on that. The union of Arianne and Willas would be a great idea. I would like to suggest a few possible match ups. Garlan/Sansa or Quenten/Sansa, and Trystane/Shireen. It was kind of shame that the rest of the Stark Clan wasn’t there. I could just imagine how Arya would be acting during the Grand Melee. The ending was great too. It was another way for Will to stick it to his evil/mad stepmother and stepbrother. I am wondering if you are going still have Jon Arryn murder by Baelish and Lysa? If so, will be in Winterfell or in King’s Landing? If it’s the latter Will he stop it. Please update as soon as possible.

COOOOOL

Tried reading before don't know why I stopped but, Lyannas eyes weren't blue they were Grey like most starks. Plus for a 2 year old william is pretty strong to be stomping on an armored foot and it hurting. Plus you made Lyanna more annoying if she wasn't kidnapped she didn't want to be with someone that would sleep around yet would fall in love with someone that was married and be okay with running away togeather. Plus Author not staying with Jon to serve a bastard and robert allowing the one who helped kidnap lyanna stay with his and her son would never happen.

Lyanna Stark is a whore bitch in this story. What a slut of women.

This chapter was amazing.

I'm curious about something, is Will going to use canons later down the line?

Obrigado pelo capítulo incrível, Autor-San!