Reviews for First Battle
pokEFan22 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Poor Misty. I thought she was supposed to be the gym leader. Whatever, it was still a cool story!
Todd Maxwell chapter 1 . 1/31/2002
Ha beaten by an 8 year old. Pretty good funny too
Kristen Riddle chapter 1 . 5/28/2001
That was a cool story. Too bad Hitmonlee wouldn't listen to him though. Hmmm...I predict he'll get along much better with Cubone.
Miss Black Dragon chapter 1 . 4/10/2001
How cute. Bluenette, SIMCLTM! I thought Atoshi was *very original*. His Hitmonlee sounds a lot like Satoshi's Charizard.
ChocoCream2 chapter 1 . 12/9/2000
aww... : )

u own Atoshi rite?
cedric977 chapter 1 . 12/8/2000
a very interesting story