Reviews for The Spark
seb chapter 29 . 8/3
please dont kill severus
My Lady chapter 30 . 3/30
I really love this fic. Harry and Severus's interaction in the last chapter is really really great and fantastic and sweet. It's melted my heart.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/29/2017
Especially good chapter!
Panda No Ashi chapter 30 . 1/5/2017
Loved every single chapter. 3
Thorilian chapter 30 . 10/15/2015
Awww, loved it wish there was more.
whrr.trudy chapter 30 . 6/5/2015
Enjoyed your story :)
Thank you for sharing!
fan girl chapter 30 . 3/28/2015
Flaming Rose chapter 18 . 3/16/2014
Love it! Thank uou so ,ich and bye! Peace!
Flaming Rose chapter 3 . 3/16/2014

I love the idea of this story, but there are some grammer mistakes -which I know you pointed out would be there, but I feel like being annoying-, but the plots still good. There are a few problems with the sentence flow too.

P. S. Severus is soooooo sexy!
Rabi Rabbits chapter 30 . 3/29/2013
It's so cute!
Lumcer chapter 30 . 2/18/2013
I've read this before though I'm not sure if I reviewed, but I love it just as much as I did last time :D hence the reread!

Hortensia chapter 30 . 5/9/2012
Well, that was fun! Pity you didn't get to fix the grammar. Did you notice the story is not listed as complete? Anyway, thank you for this.

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YeCatsJ chapter 30 . 4/5/2012
Cute story. Has a lot of potential for a great story if you could get all the grammar fixed.
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 30 . 1/13/2012
~ All through seventh year he had searched for his Night Dancer,

He has told you he is from future. But you don't remember...

~ they were obviously going to ignore any form of truth

That's Gryffindors for you.

~ Knowing your luck Voldemort wouldn't be able to kill you if you even if you were a willing participant.

~ It made no sense to him as he knew that Harry hadn't spent Friday night with Draco

Cannot Severus understand that it's a cover story?

~ He could here the taps running in the bathroom.


~ Why had he ever thought Harry needed protecting? Harry was capable of protecting himself better than any one.

Not better than any one, but still, Harry is quite good at defending himself.

~ You can't go; he'll know you're a spy.

How would he know?

Keep it as Harry/Severus.

The Draco's and Lucius's help might keep Harry and Severus safe.

~ he transfigured his clothes to look a little less conspectus


Thank you, Coal. You are one more reason for me to like and respect Vampires.

~ we'll find you something decent to where.


~ noun had guessed that he had been sitting at his lovers side the whole time.


~ a great ending

Agree. No epilogue needed. A sequel could be nice, but it will be quite different; Harry graduating, Severus - no longer spying, war finished, Harry and Severus living together, Harry finding a profession for himself...

Good luck, Coal, Draco, Harry, Lucius, Severus.
Nenefee chapter 19 . 6/22/2011
Could be an interesting story if it didn't consist of so much incoherency...

I really hope you are either under the age of fifteen, not a native speaker of English or have a medical condition that explains the haywire spelling. Otherwise it'd be just distressing! And if you're unable to write correctly on your own, there are such persons called Beta...

Also, there isn't much going on concerning characterisation..

Would have loved to continue reading, but this is giving me a serious headache.
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