Reviews for Rituals |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! Pleeease, post the next chapters soon! It's perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good book, and worth a 5 star review, but, as with other stories and one-shots, both long and short, it's TOO good to end where it does, and it just begs the question, what will happen next... Of course, I won't mention how a what, 6year old? Harry Potter, is somehow, watching I guess is the word, a naked 3? Year old Ginny Weasley, performing some pretty serious magic. Although he's "her 'arry" so that makes it ok, to that extent, but that in and of itself brings up another question, which is... IDK if it was said in this one-shot, but I didn't see it, so, how the heck did she know he was "her 'arry", or what he faced at home, and does that mean that at 3 years old she already knows somehow that (at least in this AU) she's destined to be "his Ginny" in the future, already, and can plan for it? I mean, knowing that you're going to marry someone by the age of 3 would give you time to uh, prepare, or get used to it, and considering that most Harry/Ginny AU fanfics have them married by 10-12 years of age, well preparing needs that extra amount of time, one would think, as far as rationalizing Ginny's comments in this story goes... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how long the protection lasted? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this going to be continued |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story i would love to see more of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() mwahahahaha. Brilliant work, Gin. |
![]() ![]() Such a start for a story! Please, keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great start which could turn into one fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I wish you had carried on with this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love to read Molly's reaction to Ginny in the morning! This was so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woooah loving it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, i love this! Ginny is so cute, but im curious about some explanation of why/how she is so advanced and how are they connected. this is not marked as a One-shot or as a completed fic, so... is an ideia you wrote but didnt want to continue? cause I would love to read more if you ever feel like continuing. Harry feeling protected and loved for the first time in his life (that he can remember) is really nice. the spell stops the dursleys from hitting him directly, but there are punishments like not giving him food that i imagine the spell cant help. thank you for this fic, you are an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() The protections arent nearly as subtle as I predicted. I expected more of a magical shield rather than a counter strike. Well done! I look forward very much to see where this one goes |