Reviews for Beneath the Surface
TommyandKimberlyFan4Ever chapter 11 . 11h
Great Chapter. I love it and this story. I really can't wait to see what happens next. :)
TommyandKimberlyOliverFan4Ever chapter 11 . 11h
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TommyandKimberlyOliverFan4Ever chapter 11 . 11h
I love this
Mei fa-chan chapter 10 . 11/19
Great chapter!
CARO chapter 10 . 11/14
wow snape ayudando a harry
jadely31 chapter 10 . 11/14
Good chapter. I love that Hermione came out last chapter to ignore the trap Dumbledore had set for them with the stone. And Snape agreed to the training in this chapter. Way to go.
scrappy8 chapter 10 . 11/12
great chapter
TommyandKimberlyFan4Ever chapter 10 . 11/12
Great Chapter. I love it. I love that Snape is going to help Harry train. :)
TommyandKimberlyOliverFan4Ever chapter 10 . 11/12
Great Chapter. I love it. I love that Snape is going to help Harry.
TommyandKimberlyFan4Ever chapter 9 . 11/7
I love this story. I look forward to seeing what happens next. :)
TommyandKimberlyOliverFan4Ever chapter 9 . 11/7
Great Chapter. I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Nanettez chapter 3 . 11/6
James Potter was not a seeker he was a chaser.
caro chapter 8 . 10/31
woww al fin un nuevo episodio , me gusto mucho
scrappy8 chapter 8 . 10/29
great chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 10/29
Yes, I thought as much. You are parading down JKR Blvd. with no clue where you want to go. I've read the books and watched the movies. The only difference is that pointless ball. Hermione was a wall flower until Ron found her and Harry "impressed?" the guests as they arrived. So far you could have introduced Harry as Fludge's ward and said "read the books". You did manage to leave out Harry catching the snitch in his mouth and his scar reacting to the back of the DADA professor's head. Let us know if you decide to deviate from cannon and I might rejoin the story.
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