Reviews for The Ones Who Lived
Fugacity7 chapter 7 . 10/25
You've done an excellent job of being mostly consistent with cannon. The only point I'm not sure about is Harry returning to Hogwarts. At least in my head-cannon he went straight into auror training to become the youngest auror in history.
Hinny FTW chapter 7 . 10/25
Sooo first giving her a professional broom, then surprised she gets picked up by a team? I'm missing consistency.

Also, name 1 time when Harry acted entitled in the books. Even disappointed, he might be snappy but never entitled, like Ginny had to live with him or else.

Please make sure the characters actually stay in character.

Other than that, it's an interesting read.
Fugacity7 chapter 1 . 10/24
No sweat if the story does not take into account CC.

CC fails, on several points, to take into account JKR made herself about HP prior to the release of the play. She went back and tried to delete some of her earlier statements from her HP website but copies of the originals have been archived and show that CC ignored or contradicted the original series.

If we just take CC as being slightly AU, then the play can be enjoyed. If we try to compare it against the books (and/or movies) and insist on consistency, then it becomes aggravating.
blattgefluester chapter 3 . 10/20
I would have thought that ginny would have been a little shaken by Harry's (temporary) death but she didn't seem affected by it at all in this
flniteowl911 chapter 3 . 9/22
It's a very good story so far
Guest chapter 2 . 9/21
I'm eager to réadaptation the next chapter !
laloudu77 chapter 1 . 9/16
Salut ! C’est quel titre en FR du coup ? Je crois l’avoir déjà lue mais j’ai un petit doute
Steamboat Willie chapter 1 . 9/8
Oh my ! :D
Thank you, Gwen and Mica ! It's such a pleasure to rediscover Harry Potter 7, 3/4 in english ! 3
Danaud64 chapter 1 . 9/6
Hey salut !

J'ai déjà lu ta fic en français deux ou trois fois (elle est GÉ-NIALE) donc c'est sûr que je vais pas la relire en anglais.

Par contre ! Cette histoire est apparue dans ma boîte mail, et il me semble qu'il y a une petite erreur dans le titre... Ça serait plutôt "The ones who live" et pas "The ones who liveS" , puisque ones est au pluriel, pas de "s" au verbe (signe de la troisième personne).

Après c'est peut être volontaire parce que c'est vrai que ça sonne mieux avec un "s", mais je tenais quand même à te prévenir, c'est dommage dans le titre ! (Et peut être qu'au final c'est moi qui me trompe, sait-on jamais)

Bref, super initiative de traduire cette fic génialissime en anglais, ça te garantira un plus large public !

Bonne soirée,
~Danaud64
clodina chapter 1 . 9/6
hi
j'ai pris beaucoup de plaisir à lire cette traduction... j'espère sue la traduction aura beaucoup de succès...
bisous
Dina
Fanfictionreader03 chapter 1 . 9/6
Hoping you continu this!