Reviews for Thunder Over Musutafu |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this entire fic felt like trying to merge the MCU and MHA in every element possible(and failed horribly) when that's not required in the slightest. It also just felt like a thor lore exposition dump. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing work keep at it no matter what a hater says |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pathetic and boring attempt. Couple of hours of my life I'm never getting back... The fact that this is the 3rd attempt is telling |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is this nonsense? Is this my hero academia or the adventures of harem Thor? |
![]() ![]() ![]() No man...just no... No you will never be in a polyamorous relationship... Just forget about it and write a decent story u tool. U don't even deserve a single patreon with what I have read so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() All meaningless nonsense we all know...if you really wanna play QnA throughout the story, ask about Bifrost and it's mystery instead. And Odin force |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait so in a super hero society, where people, both known and hidden, so heroic and self sacrificing things all the time, a random kid becomes worthy of Stormbreaker, without even holding it at the time? Like seriously? 200 years and not a single worthy individual but a jackass with a hero complex is worthy? Not only is this logic asinine but also breaking the Rune magic on Stormbreaker. It's "whosoever holds this hammer..." Not "whosoever in the vicinity..." A Loki that went against his nature and created the multiverse, doesn't become worthy but a self centred person like Izuku does? B.S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe that maid deserves to be Thor instead... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude... Hold on.. 200 years after infinity war is when you wanna set your story up? 200 years and literally zero technological advancements? Despite Stark industries...despite Wakanda...despite the larger galaxy coming together? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those last couple of lines made me laugh. |
![]() ![]() Its on my top 15 favorite My Hero Fanfics Its Great please Continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've lost interest at this point |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsu with OFA not sure how I feel about that however tsu as a girlfriend for them in a story with many Asgardians I'm not a fan of it, it just feels boring and it's been done so many times and with this story you have a chance to do something els but you stick to the same crap it's disappointing |