Izukus view on relationships is absolutely stupid, he won't go on a date with someone because he doesn't know them when that's what a date is for where does this stupid concept that you need to know someone to go on a date with them come from, it's so ilogicel and annoying to read (I guess I can't get over the fact the Izuku is annoying as hell)

of all the extra heroes in the world of marvel and you still have all might as his hero, it would be better if it was Thor or one of the others but no you people can't do shit but follow canon as much as possible it's boring

why did you race swap a character?

Dropping a follow because this is kind of interesting but at the same time it feels like next to nothing has happened. Better part of 70k words and there's no sign of even the Entrance Exam on the horizon. So not really much faith of serious development based on time passing for the characters, Izuku's relationships are destined to either remain surface-level with everyone because no time is passing or they're going to develop at a lightning-pace chronologically. Might just be me bouncing off of slice-of-life, I don't know, but I'm grasping for some plot. Still, interesting enough to check the boxes and see where it goes.

momo being a "little" too creepy with the blood sample thing bro

Nicely done. I reread this whole thing and even with only the minor changes you’ve made, it really flows together much better now. I’m still looking forward to seeing Izuku’s reaction to getting his reward for summoning Momo. That’ll be fun. :P Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!

1. Is the waitress black or are they talking about Momo's hair?

Excellent chapter

These last two chapters have been falling short of the others.
You didn't start very strong in ch13 with the unnecessary blackwash of Momo but then ch14 comes along and does a bellyflop onto pavement.
Seriously did you sign up for a gender studies class in between chapters or something?
I'm willing to write this off as a mistake but if the story continues to be like these last two chapters instead of the 12 before it I'm going to have to drop it, which would be a shame because until 13 it was THE best Izuku gets Thor's powers fic I have read thus far.

This chapter (13) was a tremendous waste of time.

Pretty great chapter

Pretty good chapter

Pretty good chapter

Alright I'm out. Making one of the characters trans just cause seems incredibly rude to the LGBTQ community so bye.

Please continue I'm enjoying the story