I do like your Amelia. I also appreciate that dumbles actually used his brain for the first time in, what, a decade? Two?

They really need to prank dumbles.
I seem to recall a rather helpful reader providing some ideas for those Granger people...

*sad sigh*
Your bilius is a fairly accurate portrayal of the creature from canon, but it still hasn't been dealt with properly.

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"Dear god they're beautiful."
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God

Nicely done with the champions :)

Harry and Sirius are definitely rubbing off on Hermione :D

Still over the top, but also still quite entertaining :)

Yes, you're 'laying it on thick', but it's entertaining as heck!

*does a giddy little happy dance*
That. Was. AWUESUME DOOD! :D

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It would be a long two months, but she'd see Harry then, which was sooner than normal.
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I thought they saw eachother every Saturday when Hermione studied with McG?

Yikes, with how easy it has been to get past the 'protections' on the goblet, it seems likely they'll hit triple digits!

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which means i'm now the heir of the McGonagall legacy
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I'm

I find it odd that only Hermione's wand was given a 'power up'. What about Harry's? What about their other items?

All told, that was an incredible scene!

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"Hermione has informed me of your intentions, the ones you expressed in her christmas present
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Christmas

Wow... I know that Harry's wand is not registered and that the Ministry doesn't monitor muggleborn's homes during the school year so... I propose a little 'compensation' for their 'sacrifice:
Incontinence that strikes at random times day or night and
Random amorous feelings in one but frigidity in the other and
A hex that makes them stop and think of how they treated Hermione every time they see a child.
These spells should last for as many days as Hermione lived until they 'relieved themselves of the burden'.

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This should give you adequate time to prepare, and to put your affairs in order."
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I have to admit that I hadn't believed the phrase 'barked out laughter'.
I do now :D

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This is why I am going along and shall insure everything is proper
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ensure

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"I've tried for year to get this changed
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years

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but it is not allowed for british muggle born students
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British muggleborn

Ouch, this is going to lead to some very harsh feelings :(

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She watched the old mad walk off,
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man

That was a very enjoyable and informative way to describe channeled magic use. I'd like to yoink it for potential use in a future story if you don't mind?

I do so enjoy watching dumbles squirm.
Now, if only he was in a cell in Azkaban, trussed up like the vermin he is, for the remainder of his days.

That was one of the best descriptions of pettigrew's 'condition' that I've ever come across. Well done!