Reviews for Death's Child
AkerinSilver chapter 38 . 9/11/2024
I love this story. I was unsure about how the story started and as it progressed it started to take shape in a way that i never was able to see it go.
BarbedCaress chapter 13 . 9/5/2024
Okay
That is as much as i can stand
I can't see any believable reason Hermione would continue to attend Hogwarts.
Snape is beyond intolerable.
I know you have given him plot armor and imagine he will eventually 'get his'.
But there is no reason, other than your plot line, for Hermione to put up with it.
BarbedCaress chapter 5 . 9/5/2024
It's not triage if you only have one patient
Soraslove chapter 23 . 8/31/2024
Sounds like a lot more entries than anticipated, lol.
Soraslove chapter 17 . 8/31/2024
Hermiones parents who basically ignore her and think there's something wrong with her because she was born with magic, is a good example of a loving family? I really think she should be looking at herself, before trying to comment other people's lives. Boyfriend or not, to be honest.
Soraslove chapter 14 . 8/31/2024
Once again, why is hermione still at hogwarts? I'm sure she could join another school.
Soraslove chapter 3 . 8/31/2024
All of a sudden the fact that she has no friends and doesn't get along with anyone... and is bullied doesn't matter? Is is not possible for her to switch schools or something?
josamen1 chapter 38 . 8/14/2024
I enjoyed this story...and enjoyed the rather thorough smackdown of BlunderSnore, BadFaith, and Umb*tch
josamen1 chapter 26 . 8/14/2024
BlunderSnore you are messing with powers far beyond your ken
josamen1 chapter 18 . 8/14/2024
I hope Hermione makes a spell in her training that'll extract Ron's "short 'n' curlies" one at a time *evil laugh*
beenhere chapter 38 . 7/10/2024
i think i started this long ago and did not finish but i did just now and WOW!

thank you so much for sharing this story. It's already in my favorites and ill be a well-loved reread. thank you for haring this great world you built!

PS: did Sirius get better?
PPS: what happened to Ron?if you are willing to share)
hpmick13 chapter 18 . 7/1/2024
This story is weird, both Harry and Hermione are powerful, they have Death on their side, but they let scum like Snape torture Sirius and let Dumbledore get away with everything.

What's the point of them having power if they never use it
Incantations7 chapter 25 . 6/15/2024
If he pinned Karkaroff to the wall at the choosing, then why would he ignore him this time, much less say that it was an honor to meet?
hunzbookwyrm chapter 38 . 6/14/2024
Great story from beginning to end can't wait to see what you do next!
Mike Mattingly chapter 38 . 5/29/2024
This must be the third time I have read this story and it still amazes me. Thank you!
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