Reviews for Death's Child |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I was unsure about how the story started and as it progressed it started to take shape in a way that i never was able to see it go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay That is as much as i can stand I can't see any believable reason Hermione would continue to attend Hogwarts. Snape is beyond intolerable. I know you have given him plot armor and imagine he will eventually 'get his'. But there is no reason, other than your plot line, for Hermione to put up with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not triage if you only have one patient |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like a lot more entries than anticipated, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermiones parents who basically ignore her and think there's something wrong with her because she was born with magic, is a good example of a loving family? I really think she should be looking at herself, before trying to comment other people's lives. Boyfriend or not, to be honest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, why is hermione still at hogwarts? I'm sure she could join another school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of a sudden the fact that she has no friends and doesn't get along with anyone... and is bullied doesn't matter? Is is not possible for her to switch schools or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story...and enjoyed the rather thorough smackdown of BlunderSnore, BadFaith, and Umb*tch |
![]() ![]() ![]() BlunderSnore you are messing with powers far beyond your ken |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Hermione makes a spell in her training that'll extract Ron's "short 'n' curlies" one at a time *evil laugh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think i started this long ago and did not finish but i did just now and WOW! thank you so much for sharing this story. It's already in my favorites and ill be a well-loved reread. thank you for haring this great world you built! PS: did Sirius get better? PPS: what happened to Ron?if you are willing to share) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is weird, both Harry and Hermione are powerful, they have Death on their side, but they let scum like Snape torture Sirius and let Dumbledore get away with everything. What's the point of them having power if they never use it |
![]() ![]() ![]() If he pinned Karkaroff to the wall at the choosing, then why would he ignore him this time, much less say that it was an honor to meet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story from beginning to end can't wait to see what you do next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This must be the third time I have read this story and it still amazes me. Thank you! |