| Reviews for Death's Child |
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   VoldiesBedroomSlippers chapter 38 . 7/18/2023 Great story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. |
| Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 10 . 7/14/2023 that's not the caduceus, the caduceus is the single snake around the staff |
| RockIll chapter 38 . 7/3/2023 One of the best stories I’ve read in a while! Thank you! |
| geenakmom chapter 38 . 6/22/2023 Brilliant story! |
| Celticowl chapter 1 . 6/21/2023 one of the best prologues ever |
| SSSra chapter 38 . 6/13/2023 great story thanks for posting |
| Gwendolyn Paige chapter 29 . 4/18/2023 I like that you have clearly taken inspiration from Harry Crow with the Bell of Hogwarts and Binns’s family history, yet you embedded the aspects you borrowed into a story that is completely your own. I am loving this story. |
| Mark chapter 18 . 4/8/2023 'In loco parentis': 'in the place of the parents.' It is not possible for someone to be a 'locus parentis'. They are a guardian. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/7/2023 Just wanted to check, in spite of snape using crucio on Sirius and verbally bullying and abusing hermione every time, you still showed snape safe good happy and appreciated in the end. I understand that you have no story and are just copying canon while replacing Harry with hermione but the lack of consistency is as bad as it was in canon. BTW, Ron sexually assaulted hermione and yet they were visiting Hagrid together? And the only direct connection Ron had with Hagrid in canon was because of Harry... |
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/7/2023 McKinnons are all dead no survivors |
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/30/2023 I think the way you treate Hermione parent Is stupid and moronic. That plus the Lot of stupidity around dumbass and the rapist it make the story really you are a bad writer all hope of something good from you Will be an stupidity. |
| paulieandgilbert chapter 38 . 3/23/2023 I can only describe this story as magnificent! So many I have read start off strong and continue so for a while, but often peter out to lackluster to dismal by the ending. This however, only improved exponentially through to the impressive ending! Bravo! I admit it. I love Dumble-bashers, Weasely-bashers as well, and I must say, in this case it was handled with both finesse and class! Well done! I also thank you for allowing redemption for Severus. I'm a die-hard Snamoine fan but must admit, Harmoine is quickly growing on me! This excursion into "un-reality" was extremely satisfying and I whole heartily thank you for mapping out the trip! Who needs Barbados? I'll take the Potter-verse any day! |
| blcoachmac chapter 25 . 3/12/2023 Shock and awe! Now they are thinking just what the hell they have brought amongst themselves! |
| blcoachmac chapter 20 . 3/12/2023 First story I've read where Dan and Emma weren't loving parents! |
| blcoachmac chapter 15 . 3/12/2023 Why doesn't Minerva just replace the points Snape takes? She has the authority! |