|Reviews for For Ashley|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2020
I love it! It's a really emotional thing to have in the first chapters. That mixed with the prologue left me in tears at the end! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
| DancerDragonRL chapter 3 . 4/27/2020
Ok this is an amazing story.
But I have one question.
If Clancy is Ashleys biological father (whixh I am guessing he is ) then why do they need to sign papers?
Really good story... loved it
| couscous10000 chapter 3 . 4/20/2020
Wow! This is awesome!
I really love your tone of voice and writing style for Hitch and Clancy, (Hitch especially) and the prologue was incredible! (Like it gave me shivers...)
Your incorporation of things from the books (the code) and additional things (the letters) is so well done, and really believable.
My favourite line so far: "It took three months for the letter to dispatch and one second for his heart to break" - So powerful and well written!
Looking forward to seeing where this story goes, and how it develops!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/27/2019
Who’s the father?
| amaima chapter 3 . 11/21/2019
make there be a twist and actually ruby is alive but in hiding.i am so sad that she is dead.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2019
Omg this is so good! Yessss please update!