Reviews for The Dragon Cub |
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immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 4 . 9/14/2019 I agree with the non-demonizing or sanctifying of Catelyn and Ned. Cat had no knowledge of the truth and her reaction was actually what was expected for women of her background to bastards. You really can't blame her. Though she didn't have to be a bitch. Ned, his is understandable as well. He was tired of war. He didn't want to fight his supposed best friend. He was caught between a rock and a hard place. He also may not have known that Jon was trueborn. We don't know the full extent of what happened at the Tower. |
aussieKayz chapter 4 . 9/14/2019 Great chapters |
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 4 . 9/14/2019 Excellent couple of chapters, the flow of the story feels very well done to me. That said, there are a few typos (mostly things like "They" instead of "The" so possibly auto-correct is the cause), but overall it's a great story and a refreshingly original piece of work. Keep up the great work! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/14/2019 Instead of Margaery, I’d rather see Jon with Arianne Martell. Margaery Sue is the go-to for all male-lead romance fics and it gets very stale and bland after a while. Besides, even with whatever Elia wrote to her brothers, frankly, that would never be enough to make up for her life and the lives of her children being taken so brutally. A marriage between Doran’s daughter would heal old wounds much better. The Tyrells would follow anyway once it got out how weak and unstable Robert’s rule is, and that Jon has a dragon (eventually). |
Anime Princess chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 Who would have thought that Tywin dying would see Jaime making such a discovery! How does Catelyn feel about this? What will she do when the truth is finally out? Be punished, but forgiven too I hope. |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 Will this be a jonerys endgame? |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 Still a child and he has Two Kingdoms behind him.! |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2019 If Jamie is going West there is Zero reason for him to go to White Harbour.! White Harbour is on the East side of the continent ! If however he wants to go to King's Landing first then, and only then will it make sense. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 Does Robert really hate Tyrion that much ? |
Blizzarddragon777 chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 As far as Valerian swords go dark sister is a good targaryen sword |
xan-merrick chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 great start can't wait for more please update soon |
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 2 . 9/12/2019 Excellent story so far, I'm actually pretty excited to be able to read more of it in the (hopefully near) future! Keep up the great work! |
Aegon Potter 99 chapter 2 . 9/12/2019 great premise, will be interesting to see Cersei's take on all this... I hope you play that dynamic well. |
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 2 . 9/11/2019 Nice start. Keep up the good work. |
OBSERVER01 nli chapter 1 . 9/11/2019 Nice start. |