|Reviews for Broker Report on the Citadel : Internal Structure and Organization|
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/12/2022
It just hit me that Shepard will be the Gun To The Head Of The Shadow Broker.
| Zarroc789 chapter 8 . 11/10/2021
What is the Omega Protocal? You got me so damn curious!
| jorenvanderark chapter 8 . 7/3/2021
Doesn't the use of a Hanar soul name link the speaker to Kata? I think the book is the Hanar infiltrating the celestial council.
| Sadogo chapter 8 . 1/30/2021
Holy hot dogs. That was... A lot. I have to keep reading. Gotta see how far this rabbit hole goes.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 8 . 12/27/2020
you didn't specify if the life span of keeper queens was as limited as of the males or not.
and were the Griannon partially inspired by the Go'auld? because i can see some similarities. you know, if the Go'auld were actually capable of backing up some of their bullshit. well, them and the Alterans, given that most Go'auld technology is just poor imitations of theirs. and they actually WERE capable of backing up most of their bullshit. until they become a bunch of spineless wimps who lacked the will to act and left their descendants to clean up their messes.
The Zha'til are obviously inspired by the Borg.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 7 . 12/27/2020
so, my comment is about this Scipio Acilrian. more, your contention that in order to set up a powerbase in the terminus legally, he had to be a Spectre. it's the terminus! it's by definition, lawless. people can do whatever the hell they want there as long as they're strong enough to survive the actions of anyone who objects. also, this UTF sounds like something the Prussians would be jealous of, heh.
...Pacifia T'Rome? what, was Pax Romana already taken?
| AnthonyR89 chapter 5 . 12/26/2020
why didn't you touch on the First Contact War in regards to the CSTG?
| baud001 chapter 8 . 11/21/2020
Didn't Ilos blew up back in ME1, precluding any recovery of materials?
| baud001 chapter 7 . 11/16/2020
Lots of cool stuff in the article and it's nice having a variety of profiles, not just hard core badass.
Regarding Surion having killed 20 spectres, that's a lot of rogue members for an organisation that's a hundred strong and I'd question the abilities of the council to select loyal spectres. Or maybe the council should provide a better retirement plan than an Turian with a gun :).
For KIRO VAKASSA, it could have been made clear whether she became a journalist before or after becoming a spectre, because that'd change the dynamic of the character quite a lot.
Also, since there is an oversight of the spectres by the council, explaining how Saren avoided it would be interesting.
For Veralonia Geneso, there's mentions of both deathwatch and blackwatch, maybe that's a typo.
The spectre cook, that one was a brilliant idea.
For Ania Natarinus, did it had any impact on the dealing of council members on Noveria (alteration framework, nightwind, NOVENSILES)? Could be an angle to work on, see if the council is aware of it and tolerates it.
For Herlius, being 4 meters tall would seem to be a big disadvantage when moving indoors, as all buildings would be proportioned for people twice smaller or less. Yes, he most likely can cut his way through most building materials, but that'd slow him down and warn enemies of his position.
Interesting to learn all the plans the council has for the Terminus.
And now I am really interested in the last chapter too.
| Ravenant chapter 8 . 11/9/2020
hope that some of this SCP-tier tech makes it out into galactic society for when reapers show up for dinner. You see this as a way to induce existential despair, but i see it as the proof that even specks of dust as the Citadel Species are, they are capable of fighting against the winds that keep them afloat and can cast them into the Beyond, and earn themselves a few more fleeting moments of existence, as they write of their life in the canvas of the universe, for everyone to read or see.
| Earl of Gigantor chapter 7 . 11/6/2020
Coming back to this, it's unbelievable that a galaxy with this much scientific knowledge and technology doesn't have a lot of low-level terrorists, destitute dictators and petty warlords producing work cheap, low quality fission and fusion weapons for warring with each other.
| Qrs-jg chapter 8 . 10/28/2020
As with all things in the LP Verse, exceptionally written; Chapter 7 could have been a standalone book on its on! Chapter 8: SCPs in space, how could I have ever go wrong with spooky universe ending things. I do hope we see these powers and organizations bleed into the main story. It’s worth the wait for sure.
| Earl of Gigantor chapter 7 . 10/28/2020
I bet it's a hanar.
| Nogui chapter 8 . 10/28/2020
"until it would resemble a 2D five-pointed star" ME3 ending PTSD strikes
"And you're letting Tazzik write it? Really?" Oh, sounds like he has some juicy intel.
"those conducting the tests would swear that the intelligence is trolling them" Big-C is a troll
Wait, how the fuck did the Broker get enough penetration of Omega Response to know their age?
Aaaaah, Delacor! At least someone knows something. I wonder if Omega Response also does...
I'm glad that someone in the Citadel is actually aware of the fuckery in the Hanar and Batarians.
Oh, the plot regarding the Crucible thickens, with the Celestial Council knowing of it.
LOL, the Arcann are a meme even in the Archives.
I am amazed at how much the Celestial Council knows about the Levis, Ythrongi and Reapers.
Haha, the Elder One! Sloth is pleased.
'heavy space'... Oh no...
| BigBirch chapter 8 . 10/27/2020
I could read an entire series about Mass Effecf SCP Foundation. That was excellent! I look forward to reading more of whatever you put out.