Reviews for Harry Black Book 2: The Rising Darkness
Azza7111 chapter 35 . 10/5/2022
How come all of a sudden none of them know it’s horcruxes? Dumbledore told Harry he was one in book 1… daphne also read about them.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/1/2022
I could do better than Harry. What is wrong with you?
Guest chapter 17 . 10/1/2022
No I hate Michael but I love your story.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/30/2022
Very well done. In all my reading I have not seen an exchange between these two like this before. Again, very well done. Also, I do like the story itself as well as the first one. Sasha
Sasha Starr chapter 12 . 9/30/2022
Remember, almost all those who write mean reviews do not put themselves out there by writing stories on their own, mostly because they don't have the drive or the talent or both. I have never seen a mean
review from any of the better-known writers because they know what it takes in time and effort to be good at writing a story. You are doing good and are getting better. Write for yourself, take good advice but stick to your plan. Sasha
NaaBe chapter 22 . 9/24/2022
Phew, it feels so good to see that Moody is the real one and he has doubts about what Dumbledore may have done and will help get rid of it for Harry. Sucks for Sirius though, I hope he doesnt have to go into hiding.

I think it will only be a temporary setback for Dumbledore, and he will try manipulations some other way
NaaBe chapter 18 . 9/24/2022
Oh common! Why would they interfere at that stage, he was just about to get the egg. Now Krum wont be the last, and will be even more smug and unbearabel plus Harry is outed as a Parselmouth
NaaBe chapter 14 . 9/23/2022
I hope Dumbledore doesnt do something to manipulate Harry and make him doubt Daphne. With Krum also there, it might turn out bad :(
NaaBe chapter 11 . 9/23/2022
damn, I hate manipulative Dumbledore specially when he is winning!
JuliusMD chapter 35 . 9/19/2022
thanks for writing Harry Black Book 2
JuliusMD chapter 13 . 9/15/2022
how come Emmeline is there? I thought only blacks were allowed inside the wards?
JuliusMD chapter 2 . 9/13/2022
if Draco is a werewolf, why didn't they have another child?
Raeger chapter 11 . 9/12/2022
Really loved the scene with Harry and Kreacher at the end of this chapter. Well done.
Raeger chapter 2 . 9/12/2022
Series has been great so far, and definitely continuing to turn the pages. Just wanted to leave a quick comment here on the characterisation of Lucius - it was surprising to me that a character distinguished by his poise and cunning should be introduced to us as plainly unhinged and ill-considered in his evaluation of the situation.
Paigebypaige chapter 12 . 8/11/2022
This is 2022...I just started reading your books, but sounds to me like, when you were writing, you let too many negative reviews get to you. If you don't make the heart speed up, make you crave the next thing, piss you off, bring a tear to your eye, make you smile...or ANY emotion, you ain't doin your job. Seems a negative review made you make the bad review people feel SOMETHING! So...good job. I certainly am annoyed that this ain't paper pages where I could skip ahead! HAHAHOHOHEEHEE.
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