Just imagine what Harry and his Godfather and Uncle Remus could have done with a eight person family camper home on wheels that can driven to the World Cup camping field! I mean, with wizard space! The bunk beds inside could become each person's economy sleeper like on the nonmagical long distance train accommodations! Plus, the bed over the driver cockpit could become a whole upper story, room for three double beds.

If Harry ever wants to be a little more snug with Daphne on a cool day or evening, he invite her to put only her left arm into his jacket, while he keeps his right arm in its sleeve. That way they can both be as snug as kissing friends can be.

Way too much side character POV. Though I do like the side characters and the way you portray them, remember who the main character is. It feels like Harry barely matters as much as Michael or Neville does at this point.

Astoria is amazing in these stories. You have portrayed her wonderfully. And shes my unexpected favourite ever since the first few chapters of book 1 which I suprised myself by. I love her relationship with Harry and she reminds me of my close relationship with my twin sister despite us living in two different countries. Me being a boy people couldn't understand how I could be so close to my twin as well as have a partner but the way you make Astoria is exactly how my twin is.

Really loved the fic, everything about it was wonderful. Onto the third part now:)

So Astoria is angry because Harry is hurt at the fact her sister kept a secret from him? The secret she specifically asked daphne not to tell anyone? What the fuck is wrong with you for making Harry a little wimp in this situation. Astoria and daphne need to be on their knees begging him for forgiveness because of that. There is no reason for you to write Harry as you have him right now.

This is a really well written story. anything cannon is much more believable. all deviations are extremely exciting. Top of the line content.

Ok, I will probably write a more extensive review once I have reread all three books. I also sent you a DM earlier in case you missed it, but I’m just commenting on Claire and Michael in this chapter during and after Burbage’s class. They are both idiots, but loveable ones. I really like how you portrayed H/D getting together throughout the books, but these interactions between Claire and Michael are hilarious to watch. It’s very amusing. As a sidenote my favorite character is Astoria and I love Harry and her whenever they interact. As a final note, I love this series you are making. I read the series before you posted the third book so I can’t comment on what you wrote there, but if it’s anything like the quality you’ve written so far, I hope you consider an actual career in writing, you are really good at it, and although you have sort of a crutch because this is a fanfic in an established universe, you are really good at crafting semi original believeable and flawed characters. I’m really glad you didn’t make anyone completely perfect. One thing I do remember that happens throughout this book is the Harry/Daphne/Krum drama, and I’m conflicted on that actually being believable, although the reason I can believe it I work spoil in a review, but the reason I can’t believe it is because of a certain thing you wrote in the first book, the bond runes. With the way you explained them, Daphne/Harry shouldn’t be having the problems they will be because they have proof they are practically soulmates right there. Especially with the hint you dropped a chapter or two ago with Kreacher calling Daphne Mistress. I’m literally trying to give feedback without spoiling too much so I am trying to be as vague as possible, but if you want to discuss this review, go ahead and DM me, I would love to discuss this series with you. I’m going to go back to reading, but I will definitely post another review again at the end of the third book, but I might post more reviews of other chapters, although if you DM I will post my review in our conversation instead of here. But sorry, tangent, This series has had me in it’s grip for the last day and a half. I love it.

I love house to lol, keep it up I love your writing

mother fucker you've got me hooked. this is a story. but your turning it into a legend

I suspected it before, but now I’m certain that Krum is the one either polyjuiced or imperiused. Given the way he was acting before, and how differently he faced the dragon compared to canon, plus as far as I can tell he doesn’t have the strong accent he had in canon. Moody could be, but given what happened with Peter, things will definitely happen differently.

Yay I was hoping Claire was being brought in for Michael!

I have discovered a new ship I'd never conceived of before. Remus X Narcissa. Please fic gods make it so

I mean I wouldn't forgive Daphne for the betrayal, but that's just me. Supposed to have trust in a relationship. Ya tell each other things that ya wouldn't tell others, rely on each other, your other half.

I disagree with Harry strongly, detachment is better especially in his situation. Everything will be taken away at some point, better to live life that way and with that mentality because it will all end at some point anyway.