Fleur fought a chimera not a dragon

Actually, it was Kreacher's death that bothered me. You made the use of impactful deaths excessive. As for Cedric, you certainly fattened him up before you killed him. Your Cedric was more likable than JKR's Cedric. Anyway, good luck with this story. I don't like too much tear-jerkers in an adventure story.

Okay, I take it back. Dumbledore is a MOB. Is he going fully insane that he thinks sabotaging Harry in the middle of an effing war is a good plan?

How is this story not marked as Drama? You love it clearly.

So far this story seems to be about Michael more than Harry. You are aware that it is a Harry Potter fanfiction right?

Bit of advice, when working on books/fanfiction like this, it's better to combine chapters like this with another chapter. I dont think I've ever read a book that I enjoyed that consistently had entire chapters without the main character(s)

Just felt like pointing it out, but Fleur fought a chimera in your story, not a dragon. And here she is mentioning a dragon.
This is the first mistake i could spot in both this book and it's prequel, so great job! And you should know that you are simply an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!

OH SHIT I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Im so happy that harry now knows Dumbledor has been manipulating him! Thank you author! I love you!

You did a great job in delivering Harry's conflict in regards to the deaths he feels responsible for, it definitely had the right amount of time and emphasis dedicated to it.
I'm looking forward to the next book (and yes, I know, at the time of me writing this there's already 3 chapters out, I'm quite excited about getting to those now!) and to see how you develop all the characters moving forward! One thing I really wonder about is when Daphne and Harry are going to start trying to incorporate their runic bond into combat. So far it's kind of not received any attention anymore after "serving its purposes" in book 1, but I already saw some hints at one possible use for it. I just hope that they'll also try to think of other ways to take advantage of it, since it has so much potential (and with the displayed disparity in terms of power, might be one of the few legitimate ways of giving them a true fighting chance). And, well, Moody DID fight the last recorded people who used it, didn't he? So he's bound to know something about how it could be used in combat...
Anyway, thanks for this book, now I'm off to start reading the next!

Ooh full time training with Moody? Harry's in for a busy Summer

That was a very interesting twist with fleur. I’m glad you used her in a good way versus a lot of stories that choose Krum over her. The Cedric death happening with fleur as the champ was a nice touch

Awesome chapter

That was adorable

An heir

Great use of fleur here