Reviews for Harry Black Book 2: The Rising Darkness
odonnellzoo99 chapter 9 . 1/15/2021
BTW, I love the fact that you describe the Ice Queen face as Daphne’s “resting bitch face.“ I’m positive that wasn’t a thing yet in the mid-90s, but I laugh every time you use that description.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 8 . 1/15/2021
Also I think how Neville and Hermione is progressing works well.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 8 . 1/15/2021
Apparently those concerned that Claire is around to create love triangle problems for Harry and Daphne weren’t paying attention to your comments about deciding not to have Susan come around on Michael but instead bringing in a OC as his love interest.
The “bunk mate” comment cracked me up but Michael was playing with fire on that one.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 6 . 1/15/2021
Michael embarrassing Harry about how he found him and Daphne that morning was so good.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 5 . 1/15/2021
One of the downsides of your A/Ns is a spoiler factor. There was no way Astoria was getting hurt by that DE. You’ve admitted that she is your favorite character in this story to write. It seems likely that she is pretty safe in most tense situations. I ultimately consider this a good thing since I don’t want anything to happen to her either. Excellent chapter.
Zayden Shade chapter 32 . 12/29/2020
You know what I think you did most impressively? You made Kreacher and Cedric more than bystanding characters as they had been in the movies and books. You made a real and legitimate connection and relationship between them and Harry, and that's perhaps why their deaths hurt much more reading this than reading the actual series. Not dissing the original, just a notice that I think you played this death scene much better.
Keep up the good work, AuthorK.
- Zayden Shade
Guest chapter 13 . 12/16/2020
"Just give me a mom-", I cracked up when I saw that
ghostreader2110 chapter 12 . 12/16/2020
all this princess flyboy stuff makes it hard to read.
Agelmar101 chapter 33 . 12/6/2020
Really good ending chapter.

Glad Harry and Daphne parted for the summer on happier terms. Hate it when authors make the characters suffer and then drag it out for ages. You seem to maintain a good balance.

Hoping Harry's training helps him grow to be a better and stronger person. Also hoping for a bit more Harry and Astoria interactions for book 3. That seemed to drop off in book 2.

Than you for sharing this story.
Agelmar101 chapter 32 . 12/5/2020
Amazing chapter.

Absolutely genius how you turned the canon on it's head with the twists in this chapter. Very well done.
Agelmar101 chapter 17 . 12/4/2020
Great chapter. Loved every PoV in this one.
Agelmar101 chapter 7 . 12/3/2020
I hope Claire is for Michael!
AJAvenger chapter 16 . 12/3/2020
I am a vindictive bitch. The second Malfoy starts the Potter stinks badges I will shout in the great Hall that the Malfoy heir is a werewolf.
csheila chapter 33 . 11/22/2020
Wow, it was great. Nice job from top to bottom
csheila chapter 32 . 11/22/2020
Great scenes but losing those two hurts. I don't want spoilers in my review. You did a terrific job
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