You know what I think you did most impressively? You made Kreacher and Cedric more than bystanding characters as they had been in the movies and books. You made a real and legitimate connection and relationship between them and Harry, and that's perhaps why their deaths hurt much more reading this than reading the actual series. Not dissing the original, just a notice that I think you played this death scene much better.
Keep up the good work, AuthorK.
- Zayden Shade

"Just give me a mom-", I cracked up when I saw that

all this princess flyboy stuff makes it hard to read.

Really good ending chapter.

Glad Harry and Daphne parted for the summer on happier terms. Hate it when authors make the characters suffer and then drag it out for ages. You seem to maintain a good balance.

Hoping Harry's training helps him grow to be a better and stronger person. Also hoping for a bit more Harry and Astoria interactions for book 3. That seemed to drop off in book 2.

Than you for sharing this story.

Amazing chapter.

Absolutely genius how you turned the canon on it's head with the twists in this chapter. Very well done.

Great chapter. Loved every PoV in this one.

I hope Claire is for Michael!

I am a vindictive bitch. The second Malfoy starts the Potter stinks badges I will shout in the great Hall that the Malfoy heir is a werewolf.

Wow, it was great. Nice job from top to bottom

Great scenes but losing those two hurts. I don't want spoilers in my review. You did a terrific job

Oh gosh, it's great. But I fear it was also naught

I liked it a lot. Great how the kids stood up to everyone, including Cedric’s dad.

Why didn't Sirius just levitate Vance to seat? But this is a quibble

It's actually astronomy not astrology, not trying to be mean but I'm getting bothered by it

Liked it.

You have a very different Moody

Intriguing.

I enjoyed everyone's reactions to the ritual. Moody was especially inspiring