| Reviews for Harry Black Book 2: The Rising Darkness |
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   torchy22 chapter 23 . 7/16/2022 usually don't comment, but not screaming about the ball, I am enjoying the story you are weaving and the pace is fine. Good stories like this one have multiple elements that advance the plot and in my mind even what some may complain is fluff or skip-able. are essential to a storyline. thank you for crafting a great story that I am truly enjoying! |
| scotty26 chapter 17 . 6/9/2022 You really going there with remus and cissy? That will be interesting to see if you go there instead of tonks |
| scotty26 chapter 3 . 6/6/2022 I feel like this story and especially astoria could br perfect for an anime series..as every time i see one of them puff out their cheeks..it reninds me of one of those anime that have characters that do that lol like sailor moon |
| ossifrage chapter 23 . 5/31/2022 Rather than the "Segway" scooter, you meant "segue". |
| bode chapter 24 . 5/11/2022 man, this fic is cringey AF. the first book wasn't like this so what on earth happened that you decided to make things so corny and touchy-feely. I find myself skipping over paragraphs because in every chapter someone is feeling "vulnerable" and expressing emotions. that's some cheesy shit. |
| flyboy1060 chapter 2 . 4/25/2022 Wow. Draco a werewolf?! Huh? What a twist. And yet, it fits his personality and explains his impetuous nature and irrational decision making process. I'm impressed with this storyline. Keep on the impressive works! Michael from Seattle |
| flyboy1060 chapter 1 . 4/24/2022 Ohhh . Ominous beggings... |
| Enforcer209 chapter 34 . 4/14/2022 Well that was interesting |
| cameron1812 chapter 34 . 3/31/2022 An absolutely amazing story! Thank you! |
| cameron1812 chapter 20 . 3/30/2022 The moment with Michael and Claire was a thing of beauty... Just perfection. |
| cameron1812 chapter 11 . 3/27/2022 Best Convo with Kreacher in any fic, ever |
| cameron1812 chapter 10 . 3/27/2022 Such an awesome chapter of teenage angst, hormones and teens behaving like teens, set with more difficult issues pertaining to magic. Love it! |
| cameron1812 chapter 6 . 3/26/2022 Amazing. |
| cameron1812 chapter 4 . 3/26/2022 Bravo for the World Cupexcellent Quidditch visuals! |
| Yuuko Miru chapter 4 . 1/5/2022 I've read all 7 books, and ~300 Harry Potter fanfics. This is the only time I can ever remember feeling impressed by a quidditch game. Usually it's super boring, and the seeker is the only relevant part. The way you wrote it really makes it feel like something difficult to do, and incredible to watch. Hell, most fics gloss right over the World Cup itself, and focus solely on the Death Eater attack, and maybe the Veela. By rights i should be wishing you'd stop wasting time and get to the good shit, but I'm ACTUALLY invested in the game! Crazy |