I like Claire. I look forward to Fluer having a friend. She seemed so alone in the books. I, for some reason, thought Sirius and Emmaline had slept together ages ago. Maybe it was her being there at breakfast when Harry came down.

I like that Michael's Mom is coming around. I love that she was happy with his grades and encouraged him. Genius burnout is real.

Great chapter! I was rooting for Astoria to call Dobby to take her to Daphnie and get things going faster. I could understand how she couldn't call him if he would have ended up intercepting spell fire. The fight with the Death Eater wannabe and the rune on his tongue! Riveting chapter!

These chapters are sooooo good, I was not even thinking about the ball!

OMG fantastic chapter! All the new twists are awesomeness!

Sorry for not reviewing as often! Still reading between times I am able to sleep during recovery! I still love your storytelling genius!

I made it to the next book! I absolutely love this story and I really will need to start at the beginning book once I get completely off my meds from surgery. I have probably already forgotten some of the first book due to pain and being out of it. I'm still loving this amazing story keeping my mind off of the pain of healing! Thank you!

I get a feeling that Claire and Michael are gonna be a couple, I don't know why, must be the colored hair hahah

really enjoyed this very well written and the pacing is decent too

Too bad Harry could not have dived in front of the killing curse that killed Cedric, then the horcrux in his forehead would be gone.

Honestly your version of Dumbledore is I think a lot more like a real life version of him would be like. Yeah he does give good advice based off of experiences, but there's always an underlying motive. Maybe I'm too used to reading manipulative Dumbledore fics at this point but yours is definitely solid.
And having Harry, a 14 year old boy, doubt himself as a savior of an entire country's Wizarding population, is not hard to believe at all, even if Dumbles is pulling the strings a bit

This story is amazing! This is one of the best character developments I've seen in a fanfiction story, and I love how Harry is strong enough to actually do stuff but not so strong that he has no challenges. I also love this version of Voldemort. Everyone always says he's strong in Canon, but this is more like a kind of Voldemort who deserves fear. Excellent writing!

i just don't like Dumbledore character here, he's too manipulative in this story, maybe because i never saw him as manipulative even after book 7.

it's a big turn off for me for every good fanfiction that i found if there's Manipulative Dumbledore i will soon quite reading it, but because i'm too invested in this story i can't quite.

this Flyboy and princess thing, ugh!

Sheeesh and the training arc begins
Thank you for creating and completing this book. I'll make sure to read the new one. Keep updating bro.