Exciting and well written.

I posted too quickly last time. I am sorry about your grandmother. It's never easy (even when it's ”expected”).

Oh man, it was great and then bam.

Not sure I will sleep tonight

Nicely done (all parts:

God, what a surprise.

I enjoyed this chapter. Relationship moving. Getting one over on Krum. The training. And suprise

It's late but congrats on graduating.

This was a good shakeup to the story.

Sorry about Vance. Hope she shares information about her ki

Fun chapter until the end. But it's necessary.

Time to rock and roll

Right now I am trying to figure out the muggle equivalent to Astoria’s illness.

Loved the scene with Centaurs

Good job.

Worry less about things jumping around. Looks what’s happening now in 2020. Nothing ever works out smoothly (especially when unprincipled persons are active.

I love the friendships Harry has developed across houses.

Outstanding

Okay this will be good.

I adored the all the interactions among the kids. Same went for plotting

Always write on your schedule. I adored the book. Hope someone else doesn’t snap up Hermione

Exciting chapter

But if Moody is Crouch, Narcissa is total

Loved Michael in this chapter. Same went for the Greengrass sisters.

Hoping Dumbles gets slapped upside the head

Good chapter.

Can’t wait to see how Harry reacts. I hope he stands up to it. If Krum continues, I look forward to his punishment

Great chapter with the kids.

Surprised Narcissa got out alive. I hope she tells Sirius about Bellatrix’s vault