|Reviews for Competition|
| yo personyou beed chapter 8 . 5/12/2012
You seriously need to improve your writing.
There are grammar mistakes. EVERYWHERE!
And cheena is a bitch.
| chico chapter 9 . 5/27/2003
Spiffing story old chap _-
| chico chapter 8 . 5/27/2003
YEA GO GURL! I VE WAITED FOR THAT CHAPTER FOR SO LONG! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAH! WHO
| chico chapter 4 . 5/26/2003
::cringes:: Oh that a pain in the a** i cant wait to read the next chapter so i hope my computer doesnt pack in
| Swimming Angel chapter 9 . 5/25/2003
Great! What did happen to Mr. Callo and Brattany?
| Trunxgurl chapter 9 . 5/23/2003
Oh I loved it I seriously did. The dances and jealousy but you have to tell mee what happened to that slutty gurl and her dad. TTYL
| TrunkzWarriorprincess chapter 9 . 5/20/2003
Hey are you goin to do a sequel or something..cuz..i liked that..and i don't kno if u like lemons..but im just wonderring if you do or watever..but do something ..actually i don't really care
| Valkyrie4 chapter 9 . 5/19/2003
Aw... sweet ending. Callow and Brittany deserve everything bad that comes their way. *Coughpaincough*
| Crecy chapter 9 . 5/19/2003
Crecy: NO! Its over! *cries* But it was kewl n' stuff.
Cado: WHAT? Over! BUT I'M ONLY ON CHAPTER 3!
Asper: *laughs* That's what you get for mahin her mad. She knows your greatest weakness.
Cado: But this isn't my greatest weakness...
Crecy: I know. Maia is. *grins* This is the closest i could get, and it worked too.
Asper: That story was really great!
Cado: *pouts* I wanna know what happens...
Crecy: I'll let you read it if you be my slave for a week. *grins*
Cado: Um...uh...GAH! OK! GIVEMEIT!
Crecy: NOt untill we shake on it. *holds out hand*
Cado: *shakes hand*
Crecy: *Hands over the rest of the chapters*
Asper: SHe got you!
Cado: I'll worry about that later... *reads*
| Tigra Kat and Risika chapter 9 . 5/19/2003
Kat:Those some nice medals you guys got.
Risika: I know. We worked hard for them.
*Tigra walks by with a black medal*
Kat: uh Tigra..what are you doing?
*Tigra stops and stares at them then quickly hides the medal behind her back*
Tigra: Nothing, really.
Risika: *snatches medal*
Tigra: HEY! How did you move so fast?
Risika: Goku's training me remember.
Tigra: Oh yeah. *Kat takes medal*
Kat: Tigra...is this a bomb?
Tigra: _ um no.
*Risika and Kat stare at her with yea right looks on their faces*
Tigra: OK OK IT IS A BOMB! I WAS GONNA GIVE TO BRITTANY AND DUMBASS FATHER AND THEN SET IT OFF!
More Silence, Kat and Risika stare at each other then back to Tigra, then they trhwo the Medal back to her
Kat: By all means, we're not stopping ya.
Risika: Infact, you remeber we still have explosives and stuff from were we blew Tightly up in the HFIL so...we're coming along.
Kat: Lets make this worth the while. I'VE GOT GRAHM CRACKERS, CHOCO. BARS, MARSHMELLOWS AND STICKS! LETS GO!
2 hours later
*burning house, they are roasting marshmellows*
Tigra: At least we got the right house this time.
Kat: Well duh, Callow called us a hoe and we beat the shit out of him. Brittany ran into their house and Risika beat the hell out of her. All we had to do was tie them up and set the house on fire.
Risika: Hm I wonder wonder what Cheena and the others are doing?
Cheena and the others
Cheena: Have the strangest feeling that something really good has happened. Like some people killed some people I hated for me. I like it.
*Everyone shakes head*
Back to us
Tigra: Well, she can thank us later.
Kat and Risika: SMORES!
| N-sama chapter 9 . 5/18/2003
Great ending! I loved it! _
The great N-sama _
| TrunkzWarriorprincess chapter 8 . 5/18/2003
Hey that was a good chappy...soo keep goin!
| Crecy chapter 8 . 5/18/2003
Crecy: *hanging upside down on a tree branch reading chapter 8* Kewl...
Cado: There you are! I WILL GET YOU! BWAHAHAHAHA!
Crecy: *Swings up so shes sitting on the tree branch* I really want to know what happens next. Here Asper: *hands over to Asper*
Asper: *reads chapter while Cado Chases Crecy for chapter four* Wow. That was cool. Britney and her fater finally got put in their place.
Cado: NO! Don't spoil the ending for mee! *Terrified look*
Crecy: Well, this is what happens next... *grins*
Cado: *claps hands over ears* LA LA LA LALA LA LALA! ."
Asper: Shakes head* Sometimes i wonder if I'm actually related to them.
| Tigra Kat and Risika chapter 8 . 5/18/2003
Tigra and Kat: *mouths hanging open*
Risika: That felt real good. I've been waiting to punch that bitch for a long time.
Tigra: Is it just me, or did she alwas seem to be the type never to really hurt somebody then she just blows up in your face and knocks someone out?
Kat: Yeah, and here I thought the whole time you were gonna do it.
Risika: *walks over* Whats wrong with you two?
Tigra: Were in a state of shock.
Kat: I guess we've rubbed off on her.
Risika:? Did I miss something?
| N-sama chapter 8 . 5/18/2003
WE WON! YEAH! Great Chapter! Update Soon!