Reviews for Forms
pineapple-pancake chapter 27 . 3/6/2019
This is a great story. It doesn't always connects well with the cannon I would say, but story wise it is excellent. I am super engaged in the story, I love the unpredictability of it since it is so creative. You have remade quite a bit the original story which I love in a fanfic.
The only thing that bothers me is how adolescent some of the characters are, like annoyingly so, and how is that Legolas as an immortal is attracted to that I cannot fathom... But Dawn is a teenager so I should not complain. Yet I still do? :P
ParadigmShift81 chapter 4 . 8/7/2018
Dawns meeting Legolas. Lmfao
Shioh chapter 8 . 2/28/2017
What is with people falling off their horses? XDXD
Crazy night tale chapter 30 . 11/4/2016
I have read a lot of fanfics and so far this was one of the best. I mean, really, the characters, the plot, the excitation, it was great. Make me feeling all high up there. Really, I love it. And my spirits were kinda broken when I realize you had'nt updated in so long. Didn't stop me for enjoying it though. Nice job there!
tasha chapter 30 . 11/28/2015
avatargrl11 chapter 13 . 7/19/2015
You don't the pain of epileptics, so don't mock our illness!
Meteoricshipyards chapter 12 . 5/21/2015
This is really great. I love Dawn's interactions. Not sure how a Dawn/Legolas romance is well done, even if I'm not sure of it's wisdom.

I can't help but think George is also from a different dimension. His way of speaking and actions just don't seem Middle Earth-ish, or Ent-ish.

Thank you so much for writing this. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Tom A
Monsterprincess chapter 30 . 4/16/2015
First things first, I love this story! It is so well written and each character completely came to life. I don't believe you have any characters or parts to the story line that just stood in the background left and forgotten. Same thing cannot be said about the story itself. Sad face here - blow off the dust and keep writing! Please, I need more!
I want to say I started reading this story along time ago. When I do a search here on it shows only 2 Lord of the Rings stories with Dawn and Legolas. The other one is freshly new and a continuation where it looks like Dawn took Bilbo's place in the Hobbit. You mentioned at the beginning of ch 20 that you had re-written everything beforehand. The reason why I came across your story is because I remember reading where Dawn and Legolas were in the forest and Dawn quoted The Princess Bride. Is this the same story? A lot of the other things seemed very familiar to me in reading already. And if this is not the same, I have to tell you that I do not regret reading this story. And if it is, I am sorry for forgetting it a long time ago.
Ok, more to write in this review and I hope there is not a word limit. - I love, love, love Dawn and Legolas together. Their chemistry is so great. And for Dawn's Key powers coming from Middle Earth, this makes so much great sense. I read all 30 chapters in about 3 days and of course, probably made my family feel neglected lol. I'm reading this story on my phone and by chapter 27 I was ready to throw my phone down in anticipation of Legolas and Dawn kissing. Ughhh! Damn Merry and Pippin! And then this morning I balled my eyes out as Dawn said for Legolas to be held back so that he could not stop her for what she had to do. Thank God no one was home to see me crying the way I was. I blame the emotions of a mom and the crying was just tension that needed to be let go. Thank you for being such a great writer. It's funny but the stories that make me cry stick with me the most.
I hope to see Dawn back with Legolas. Maybe he will fall through to Sunnydale? And then they go back to Middle Earth? Dawn is perfect in Middle Earth I believe. And high five for evil witchy Willow. Love witchy Willow. She's the best.
Guest chapter 30 . 11/6/2014
Love this! It makes so much sense. Best lots crossover ever!
Dark Celestial Empress chapter 30 . 10/31/2014
I luv it
U are awesome foe the fact this even crossed ur mind
Protagonist Of Life chapter 30 . 2/4/2014
Oh no, not willow! I hope Dawn gets to go back to middle earth and be with the rest of the fellowship!
DragonOwl chapter 30 . 12/15/2013
Wow that was incredible! I'm sorry that it's not finished, but I'm also glad that I've been able to read this far! The romance was believable, and I liked the character development! You made everyone seem so realistic! Thank you!
drizzt chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
so you start there hmmmm this could go bad or good
Darling Drusilla chapter 30 . 10/28/2013

Not being continued?

*le Sob*

Very unfair, and wholly understandable. Life takes over sometimes and that tends to be way more important than monster slaying. I loved it by the way. Really looking forward to Dark Willow a la magic ring, and i do hope you won't mind if i snag that little idea from you for my own purposes. Loved it, I hope real life isn't being too bitchy, and carry on...

…my wayward son. _
Avalonemyst chapter 29 . 9/13/2013
More please ?!
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