| Reviews for The Propriety Failure |
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   mangosmum chapter 29 . 12/25/2019 This is many years before Florence Nightingale ushered inmodern nursingto the battlefield. No antibiotics. No way of stopping infections except for relatively clean bandages. |
| mangosmum chapter 25 . 12/25/2019 This chapter is making me cry. As an RN and Army Veteran I have seen the aftermath of wars and it's effects on those who survived. Wars in that time were especially horrendous. |
| mangosmum chapter 21 . 12/25/2019 These two women are actually quite fearsome to behold! This new version of Caroline Bingley is so multidimensional. My kudos to the writer! Fed to pigs, oh my goodness! |
| mangosmum chapter 19 . 12/25/2019 I do so love this more outspoken Elizabeth. I'm loving her being politely blunt with Mr Collins who remains clueless! |
| mangosmum chapter 17 . 12/25/2019 It was just a matter of time before Elizabeth exploded. Keeping that terrible secret inside and then trying to control everything must have been overwhelming. |
| mangosmum chapter 12 . 12/25/2019 I actually like this Fitzwilliam Darcy. This story follows the classic but has enough changes to make it interesting. I'm not a fan of following the classic with no alterations except for the minimal. Shake it up, which this writer has done! |
| mangosmum chapter 11 . 12/25/2019 Perfect set down of Miss Bingley by the infinitely more intelligent Miss Elizabeth. I could see Darcy trying not to laugh! |
| mangosmum chapter 9 . 12/25/2019 I love that Colonel explained how poor the girls would be if they married an officer in the militia. Hopefully they take his words seriously. |
| BelleHart chapter 32 . 12/19/2019 Excellent. Once I started reading, it was impossible to put down. Please continue writing. Thank you very much for all your hard work and for sharing. Shannon |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 31 . 12/18/2019 they didnt seem each other but they "love" each other. How? They only develop friendship, he even was just curios about why Elizabeth didnt pay him attention .. why Mr. Bennet say so freely what happended with Elizabeth?! Past 2 years but they love for another, weeeeeeeeell, is just an story. But seriously, he was: we didnt seem 2 years, so marry me because yolo, and Elizabeth: ok Hahahahah wtf |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 31 . 12/18/2019 It is a fanfic, but whatafuuuuuuuck. So,I dont understand the "2 years after"was just like another day. The story said |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 28 . 12/18/2019 Georgiana continue with her life and Lizzy mh |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 26 . 12/18/2019 mhhhh, no, didnt seem Darcy love Lizzy, he never show it, just friendship |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 25 . 12/18/2019 mhhhhhhh, so much unconftble Lizzy run, and everybody: meh, she is gone |
| Stephyyyy01 chapter 17 . 12/18/2019 so hard |