Reviews for The Propriety Failure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Friends indeed.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tearful chapter but grateful Elizabeth was able to educate her sisters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter could have been titled Illumination of Lina. I’ve read scores of P&P FF and this new way of seeing Caroline thanks to our heroine is so refreshing. This chapter has me perplexed too. How will D&E end up with their HEA? Maybe they won’t. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What in the world is happening here? I’m thinking it a bit unrealistic that no one heard blood curdling screams and no one saw any of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely, thank you. I loved Darcy's solution to Lizzy's problem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More excellent advice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE that Lydia and Kitty have been told the harsh facts about life as a soldier's wife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elizabeth would have been more successful if she'd grasped onto him like a gold-digger |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! Confronting start |
![]() ![]() I must share one concern. More is needed after Lizzy is reunited with Will. At least five chapters is called for. Thanks for sharing. Stay well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excelente historia. me encantó |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, fabulously written. I can’t wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A happily ever after (for Caroline Fitzwilliam too ;)) is just what it had to be. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see Miss Bingley version 2 as the wife of Colonel Fitzwilliam. I'll see what you have in mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always enjoy your story, and this one was particularly fun to read. I am glad you put the warning about intentional anachronisms up front, however, since your story about army nurses is at least 50 years ahead of its time. Thanks for sharing your talent again! |