|Reviews for Saving You Saved Me|
| Juniper chapter 2 . 3/22/2020
Nice story, don't get me wrong, but I have some nitpicks:
-seeing tears in her eyes / on her face. It's raining cats and dogs. Everything including her face is already wet and with rain getting into his eyes as well, it's hard to see. Maybe describe her red eyes instead
-stopping Bella killing Bella. Uhm. No. Fine that she froze, but it doesn't make sense to assume she did bc she would have had to kill; disarming would have worked too. Also, she was fine in the Ministry; what changed?
-'My usual tone'. There is no first person
-easier on her in class. He usually just ignores her... Which in his case is a way of going easy on people...
-McGonagall and Snape seem to get on relatively well in canon; I would hope she would be at least a little glad he made it before bringing up Hermione...
(Is this really an unusual ship?)
Oh I like the name Aurelius :-)
| Fguijgdrhvfui chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
I loved this so much!
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/8/2019
Thank you so much for sharing this story.
| HermioneIncarnate chapter 2 . 10/7/2019
This is a beautiful story.
| Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 2 . 10/6/2019
| Aglaonema chapter 2 . 9/21/2019
Wow this is the best ss/hg I've read in a long time! It was very sweet and so well constructed, I loved it
| notwritten chapter 2 . 9/16/2019
Very nice. Keep smiling.:-)
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2019
I love this!