Reviews for Direct thee to Peace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! I’m so happy that Kita is pregnant and that peace is on the horizon. Maybe she will get her wish to raise her children in peaceful times. Personally, I hope she has a son, though no matter what they are sure to be utterly adorable! I can’t wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Feeling very amused at Tobirama's plight) This is an amazing and quality fic, and I really admire how you manage to keep to your word to put this story up today. (I myself definitely can't haha) But you're amazing that's what I wanted to say. I admit, I literally squealed and dropped the work on my hand just to read this fix when it appeared in my emails. Also I really love how you use Japanese terms for their attires (they probably don't have English terms anyways) and the details (like Madara's sokutai being black) that made it all sound so convincing and *real*. I think I might have learnt more about traditional Japanese attires from this one chapter than my week-long, and very unsuccessful research; you're amazing. But... oh, poor Tobirama. I really did love how you added the backstory to the Uchiha Clan as well, it isn't Canon, I assume, so it is really original and unique how you went about it- I definitely haven't read any other fics that did anything similar at least. Also loved the description of the Uchiha's entrance and subsequent peace-thing, sorry I forgot which word you used, but it felt like you did a lot of research with that, so definitely kudos to you. (Even if it wasn't from research, coming up with all that detail is nothing less than impressive imo) Basically, I loved the last fic and I think I will love this one as well XD Reading your work is so... idk, inspiring? Awe-inspiring? I definitely admire your dedication to this story, as well as your talent for writing. Sorry if I sound over-the-top but it is the truth imo. XD Gaaaaahhhhh I'm so excited to see how this will all go~ Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The second hand embarrassment I have for for the senju is unparalleled |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You’re back! I love how characterize everyone ugh it’s my favorite and I love Kita’s mind.! |