tobirama has major mommy issues

Thank you for the chapter. I am fighting for my heart here

Am starting to think Yamato is related to tobirama because of their cat-like features like Yamato's eyes and tobirama's demeanor in this fanfic.

yES MORE FLUFF!. thank you for the chapter

This story is beautiful. From the start to end I just have no words. It's one of the only GREAT fanfics I've read that gave me closure and I can't be thankful enough!

This was a beautiful story with such a unique OC. Thank you for your story and hope you continue writing!

I cannot begin to express how amazing this novel and the book before are. So beautifully written spanning so much life and beauty without making the story about the fact the OC was reborn. The relationships were beautifully written and the diplomacy was so detailed and fascinating to follow. The amount of generations this spanned is spectacular. I am at a loss for words to convey how meaningful and well done this was and I will probably reread them as soon as my emotions recover and I remember who I am, I was so engaged in the plot

Beautiful

This is an absolutely amazing fanfic! The details are so well thought out and communicated and the plot is both unique and intriguing. I loved the build up of various relationships and how you ended up constructing Konoha in such a different fashion to cannon. The main critique is that the sheer amount of names and lineages throughout the story was so difficult to follow. But overall, I found the entire story to be immersive and captivating! Great job :D

Oh God. It's a ...I don't know..catastrophe? That I haven't found this treasure before now. It's everything I ever wanted in this universe. I love it so much. And you are beyond gifted to be able to put it into words so beautifully. Thankyou.
I'll be sure to read all your works if this is what I can look forward to.

I finally decided to stop been so lazy with not creating an account here. So in love with this story I think I shall read it for the nth time. TvT.

Reading it all again and loving it! You ok though?

This was a very beautiful and well-written story, and I am glad to have found it while browsing this site. The detail, imagery, and foreshadowing are all beautiful. I enjoyed the light-landed way that you incorporated reincarnation/use Kai in a very subtle and graceful way without taking away from the immersion. Fantastic work!

beautiful.

Happy endings are so very great ! Thank you for your wonderful work ! It is certain that I will re-read this fanfiction in a few months or years !

Hey, love the story. The worldbuilding in this is absolutely phenomenal and I adore your stories. One small issue is that while talking about whether Uchiha Naka being male or female, you mention that they were an identical twin. The only way twins are identical are if they were born the same gender as two different sexes means that their x and y chromosomes are different. The only way that Naka would be female while Aka is male is if they transitioned at some point in their life and there doesn't seem to be anything to imply this. (Sorry, if this is nitpicky but it always takes me out of the story when twins are supposed to be identical but they're not the same agab)