Reviews for Twin Haruno: Part I
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23
I love that there so so many episodes in one chapter. We all know what happened in the first arc and it feels like the story isn't dragging slowly with each update this way!

I just finished your atla fics which is how i found you and i love that Rio and Rin are both so different yet greatly written!

Good luck and stay safe!
SniperZ chapter 15 . 9/30
Don't make rio too strong that's going overboard.
Mnk chapter 15 . 9/30
Great chapter on twin haruno,so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please
Nbn chapter 14 . 9/20
Great chapter on twin Barack part 1,so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please
SniperZ chapter 14 . 9/20
In all honesty your making rio way to strong to quickly slow it down now seriously way to much.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19
Nice of you to novelize the manga but this is a fanfic website.
SniperZ chapter 13 . 9/15
Can please let naruto become a chunin to I hated that he remained a genin throughout part 1 and part 2 so please make him a chunin to I'm begging you here please.
SniperZ chapter 12 . 9/13
Let naruto and rio have a chapter of their own please more build up and bonding time pretty please.
SniperZ chapter 10 . 9/11
Make naruto stronger than his Canon self please.
Super Saiyan God susanoo chapter 9 . 9/10
I like the story. I hope you make naruto stronger than he was at canon.
Little Liar chapter 9 . 9/10
This needs work.
InoSaku chapter 9 . 9/10
Zaku sucks.
SniperZ chapter 8 . 9/6
Damn just damn.
Wretchedd chapter 1 . 8/4
Your Oc sucks
SniperZ chapter 3 . 6/20
Don't make rio stronger than everyone right away like seriously that's what hate.
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