Had some massive potential as a story, fell off like crazy

what is this

bro, what in the fuck am I reading

Qrow done fucked winters mom

Qrow done fucked winters mom

Ugly bastard gets isekaied to remnant. You are seriously fucked in the head to come up with some of this shit.

It’s hilarious how he got caught in the most deprived scenario he could make with shiros sex bots

Lol look at this guy

Retirement in his prime where he could still enjoy the spoils

He should really leave the stupid crime lords alone

Mildly crippled but could recover after a while

And kill/brainwash the smart ones

He really needs some crime lord proxies to take falls for him

I can understand when Kuro meekly makes cookies for Ophis, but when Shiro allows someone to slung him over her shoulder and carry him... it looks strange. Kuro's pride is at least not so obvious like Shiro's is and it's almost his main feature. Changing his character into this... it's fucked up. He is still doing something cool and doesn't look like stupid MC in anime, but he is just a faded version of his past self.

Drunkel Qrow

Well that was anticlimactic, I feel like so many things got skipped, downplayed, or just completely forgotten like that deal with the witches, that whole silver-eyed clones and ironman suit and the whole selem being conquered in just a few lines feels just kinda meh, but at least I hope the rewrite gets some love it's been just sitting there for a while now with no updates

Can't he just order cinder to tell him all about this shadow war instead of playing cat and mouse with open and trying to convert qrow's loyalty to telling him what he knows

Bro honestly i am completely caught off guard with this fic I mean you Succesful made what is bassecly p*rn into something that has an actual plot with characters that don't feel so one-dimensional I mean sure it's not perfect it has its flaws, especially the first few chapters they were kinda iffy tbh but you actually somehow made it work later on, I take back all the sh*t that I said earlier this is actually a good fit if you squint hard enough to ignore some of the stuff that might push away some readers (traps, pre-teen rape,Shiro taking sh*t from people when he really doesn't need to just because he thinks it's funny, and him being the d*ck that he is generally...etc)

Please for the love of god tell Glynda to f*ck off it's annoying listening to her trying to get the mc to be her apprentice or trying to question or discipline him