A very good story !
Thanks a lot for thids adventure and this grey World.
I Hope Sirius will find Rémus.
thanks

Yeah hate to say this but Harry is toxic and stupid. Why is he blaming riddle for being his sounding broad because at the end of the day Harry is being naive towards his friends who tried to kill him. Naive towards dumbledores twisted mindset yet he blames riddle for “scolding” him when all those people back stab him hoping for the best.

Harry is really annoying with the whole people saving thing. His “friend” blasted him in the back almost killing if Harry didn’t have the bond then they could have killed him with the blast yet it’s fine he’ll just need to talk to them? Fuck dude stand up for yourself!

Hermione and Ron should die. They are so lost in fumbles blinding light so much so they were willing to kill their “friend”

I loved this whole story. it was so unique. Happy Peter got a role to play, the rats transfigurations were awesome. I wish there was more lead up to the final battle, and the phoenix battle, but the main story, Harry and Tom's story, was amazing.

Great story! I read your one shot related to this one, and it drew me to this fun ride. Thanks for sharing!

I had to skip past most of the “adventure” after reading, I think, chapter 22, I got annoyed with Dumbledore’s obsession with the blue phoenix and that stupid prophecy. That battle there at the end was good.

This story has been so good, that I’ve been neglecting those housework that I need to do, because I don’t want to put down this story.

Incredible story ! I really liked it

By about the third paragraph of this story I was hooked. I don't love the soul mate trope but I've also not often seen it used so well. It went way beyond "oh you're my soul mate so there's no shimmer of free will". Just giving that choice back made me right back on board with it. Very cool use of it as a device and i really like everything you added to it. I'm a sucker for a mental bond so very much enjoyed that aspect. I'm fairly sure I've read some of your works before but the two recent ones have both been Harry x Tom and I do really like how you write them. I hope to read plenty more of your work!

I really enjoyed this. A new kind of HP story for me full of twists and turns. Definitely a good read. Is there? Or will there be a shoot off story? Of Sirius journey to find Remus. I think that would be interesting in it's own way. As well as a way to show snippets of the other characters futures lives. just a thought. Thank you for taking the time to write this. eagerly awaiting any future works.

They deserve life in prison

It's is my most favourite among all my favourite storiesThe character building, story line, the new world building, the whole soul-bond trope everything is superb, i loved it.
Harry and Tom relationship was so great... you have shown their characters so beautifully... their struggle before finding each other, their yearning for their counterparts, and their love for each other after finding... everything feel so precious.
Peter was the best supporting characters...i never thought i will genuinely like Peter in any fanfiction, he will become best headmaster Hogwarts has ever seen
Neville's advise was so crucial for Harry to accept how wrong his parents treatment of him and Tom.
Neville and Luna was awesome like always
Sirius going after Remus shows how much he developed as a character.

Overall superb superb superb story, i don't know how many times i hv read/listen to this story.
Thank you so much, I love all your stories

Loved it

All your stories are so wonderful that it's hard for to put how much they mean to me into words but I finally decided to leave a comment saying it. Thanks for all the incredible stories you write and share!