Reviews for Pack |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story ive only read one other that had harrys animagus be the indominus rex. I also like the pairing the story didnt seem rushed and how you had harry act it was a steady build up that showed him slowly maturing as the chapters went by. Anyway great story i will have to check out your others to see if they are just as good |
![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the first hp/jarassic world story i read that was actually completed. i loved it. thank you so much for sharing this with the world |
![]() ![]() ![]() so Blue is Percy Jackson |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a pretty good story. the only issue I might have is what happen to Voldemort since the horcruxes were ok he can come back and did harry still have a piece in him. other than that great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Loved Scar and Jelly and kids. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol that last bit made me laugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. A lot |
![]() ![]() ![]() An enjoyable story. Did Dumbles ever get out of jail? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Could have used a bit more buildup on the relationships and a description of the changes everyone went through as they got older, but those are minor complaints. I really enjoyed reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ask Lex. Bwahah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bwahahahahahahaaaa! XD Sqweeeee! Love love love this story concept! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I notice in a lot of stories you bash the magical world. There is no doubt that humans needed no reason to murder innocent people, you make it like every problem was made by magicals. There are an exorbitant amount of non-provoked violence throughout history. This oversimplification is annoying, i read Harry and the Vampire b4 this and it was even worse in that story. The ideas you have a great but the way Harry turns out to be the only good magical is kind of ridiculous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! Really enjoyed seeing how you integrated Harry into the Jurassic Park world. Nothing like a boy with his pet Veloceraptors... That was a cool idea, too. Enjoyed the dynamic between Harry and John Hammond. That was cool! Also enjoyed seeing how you developed Lex further, overcoming her fears and capturing Harry's heart. Loved the soldiers who were Harry's guard. Excellent bunch of characters they were. Whatever happend to Dumbledore and Snape by the way? Are they still in jail? Just wondering... Great job! |