Reviews for Pack
edboy4926 chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Awesome chapter
You know, kinda hoping Hedwig turns up.
HorusRa chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Why Harry Is not trying with Parsel, ir are you going to clasical magical Bond or the other favorite of fanfiction writers the horcrux asimilation
JasonDragon64 chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Thrilling!
WillItWork chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
So… elements of JP and JP world? I don't think you've done enough to explain why Harry is a natural alpha, but hey, it's a great story and I had fun reading what you've got here.

Raptors vs. wizards ho! Thanks for sharing.
Pandaman32470 chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Man this is a great read makes me go crazy to have to wait another day for the next chapter
erik chapter 1 . 9/20/2019
An entertaining start.
PSay chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Wow! This is amazing. I'm surprised they were able to return to the island so quickly. The wizards are going to be a problem in the future too. It is really something the way Harry is getting along with all the raptors. He has really learned a lot about animals and used it to great effect in this situation. I look forward to more of this story. pms
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
The situation with the magicals is far from resolved. I wonder if it really was migration instinct, or if the detect something coming?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2019
love this story/chapter! :)
ShadowTomes chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
This is absolutely awesome. Thanks for posting.
Pric3y chapter 2 . 9/22/2019
This is fantastic! Hagrid would be so proud!
Priest chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
This is an interesting story so far i look forward to more in the future.
aesir21 chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Looks like Harry found his family. It would be interesting to see Harry’s ideas and perspective on the new park. The migration board seems to be new to me but I could be wrong. There are five islands there so technically they could just travel to other islands.
BMS chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Sort of sad Harry is safer around carnivorous Raptors than any other time in his life.
I almost hope the magicals come and try and take Harry from his pack. Of course, if its Snape than Scar and Jelly would probably get sick afterward.
ImaginativeFury chapter 3 . 9/22/2019
Interesting take on the crossover compared to others.

I like this version more as you aren't using parseltongue as the be all end all language for all things dinosaurs. And you have a Harry that gave zero fucks about using magic instead of hiding it and maybe being eaten.
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