|Reviews for Bad End, New Beginning|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26
...don't the Waves usually have a 'kill counter' before the the boss monster spawns in or something?
Eh, suppose it's kinda irrelevant at this point...
| Brin chapter 1 . 7/11
After having read Wandering Sword Hero, I can't help but imagine the legendary bow n this story nearly pulling its figurative hair out over Shirou turning off every means it has for communicating with it. And then grasping at straws to summon Rin just so she might tell him to turn it back on. And when even that failed ... using the help menu / status menu to complain non-stop to Rin about Shirou, only for Rin to pretend to commiserate with it while using leading questions to get ever more information from the legendary bow.
Yeah, I have a little too much imagination sometimes... This is one of my favorite FSN x RotSH crossover fics. It would be great to see it expanded from a oneshot, but at the same time the fact that it ends where it does is part of what gives it its charm.
| Pixelitus chapter 1 . 5/18
Oooo, I liked this. Too bad it’s just a one shot…
| VincentFS chapter 1 . 3/22
This was going somewhat well until you pulled Tohsaka, who should be dead and not of enough importance to Shirou’s Holy Bow to resurrect, out of your ass. Seriously, that was completely fucking random and not at all in line with the chosen setting.
No wonder you stopped updating this. You backed yourself into a corner. If the Holy Bow can pull Tohsaka into another world, what need would there be for Shirou to actually level up and get stronger? It could just keep summoning more competent Heroes to do the job for it.
See how one stupid decision takes away all possible tension/excitement from your story?
| I'm a Nobody. Who Are You chapter 1 . 9/22/2022
This is still one of my favorites. I literally wracked my brain for 10 minutes trying to find this because I wanted to read it again so badly.
| tylerbraden13 chapter 1 . 8/26/2022
Please come back and update this
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 2/13/2022
We have here one of those rare, rare fics that I would be ecstatic to see more of while simultaneously satisfied with a oneshot.
| Jay-Not-So-Gay-Eleven chapter 1 . 8/31/2021
| xfel chapter 1 . 2/26/2021
| DBS GoKaNaKi chapter 1 . 2/4/2021
Que interesante está la historia
Me gustaría que la siguieras actualizando
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2020
I guess, since it has been a year, this is not getting continued after all... a pity, as I quite liked the setup, and most of the other good crossovers of this combination are stalled.
| gerahdz.sanchez chapter 1 . 8/11/2020
| jon02789555 chapter 1 . 8/2/2020
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2020
So good story!
| Eden.of.Kovir chapter 1 . 5/19/2020
My inner Otaku is annoyed by Shirou ignoring the legendary bow! But I love him.