Reviews for Summoned |
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![]() ![]() Oh no. What happened to poor Fachoo?! |
![]() ![]() At this point in the story this is already their third kiss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more ellipses, even more, author, are you crazy? with each chapter there are more and more of them, it spoils the text, my ass is already on fire, it would be better if there were spelling errors |
![]() ![]() I really liked the story from beginning to end, I really enjoyed it and I think it is the best HOTD fanfic that I have ever seen, I really didn't like that the story ended like that but I understand that writing and preparing the chapters becomes a very big burden Over time, I still enjoyed each chapter and it really feels at least refreshing that the story had an ending, even though it was somewhat open and rushed, but an ending is an ending and it seems fine to me that way. I want to thank you for the story and that you took the time in those 3 years to finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inner monologue is killing the pace, explaning the thought process on every single zombie encounter and detailing every thought otherwise... Story started out strong but now you writing about insignificant stuff like hiding the bat in the vent, you could've just said he hid it there one night, instead of writing a whole chapter about it. Dunno how he can stand Saya, needs to tell her to shut up instead of taking her bitching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude can wear whatever he wants on z-day to school and simply take a couple reprimands or just not go to class but hang around the buiding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() based |
![]() ![]() ![]() decent story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is the mc such a little wimpy p*ssy boy? |
![]() ![]() Hola, bueno, si...con su permiso pienso seguir tu historia para darle un final, me gusta mucho lo que escribiste, pero nunca me gustó ver historias que me gustan incompletas, así que intentaré darle un desenlace digno, atando los cabos que quedan, así que...se vienen cositas |
![]() ![]() ![]() ima be real here. just pick one. seriously. saeko is hot but im not sticking my dick anywhere near that. thats a hard no. saya is more than enough, personally id prefer sayas mom or shizuka. manly shizuka cause shes not married and shes a milf. older women for the win nigga |
![]() ![]() ![]() ( You know, mentioning the aircraft carrier. World war Z might be a good example of this. The 'army' there was actively helping civilians. To the point that the water filter of the aircraft carrier started to malfunction because of being overcrowded. Though they did send the people to camps afterward. That, for all the crap they got, the main dude's family didn't look any worse for wear when he got to them in the end ) don't mention that abomination movie was crap! The novel was the real quality work! At youtube there is audiobooks of the novel anyone intersted shouldbgo through those just search wwz novel the audio book comes up there is also youtube channel WWZ AUDIBLE which also has the audio book playlish with original character voices |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, he lets that bitch Says boss him around, but has a big mouth with the other group? I hope he isn't a pathetic simp that lets everything with a pair of tits use him as a doormat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, I read your fic a year or so ago and I’m so happy to see you finished it! Love it, so happy it got an ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was an amazing read, I think the best HOTD fanfic there is, read it like 3 times jaja. There was stuff preventing me from doing fanarts but I'll do them. I'll keep reading the rest of your stories because I think you are a great writer! Thanks for so much |