Reviews for Reincarnated into the world of Naruto
dastewie2012 chapter 57 . 3/19
Isn’t that a sage of six path ability
dastewie2012 chapter 56 . 3/19
Do sthen explain after not before
dastewie2012 chapter 45 . 3/19
Yoooo did he just get the all killing ash bones
Foolgod chapter 7 . 2/9
How does he know thunder god technique. If it was that easy to duplicate then everyone would use it. Also he doesn't have any sealing knowledge, so how is he making those seals.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
the hell
BlueMapple chapter 9 . 1/28
It's a bit odd that Yamato wasn't made aware of his own genin's secrets. Also, being an Orochimaru test subject and an anbu himself, it would have made sense for him to be made aware of Izaya's circumstances specifically.

Besides, what's the point of the bell test when the trio's friendship is already common knowledge ? He is supposed to know his genins in advance. In the canon, the hokage even gave the sensei the opportunity to visit their genin's residences in order to give them a glimpse of their circumstances and personalities.
BlueMapple chapter 8 . 1/28
I know it's a finished story but I still feel the need to point some things :

1 - Why didn't Haku and Kimimaro introduced themselves fully when they entered the academy ?
2 - Izaya, I can understand that the Hokage would want to keep his past and his eyes a secret but... why didn't the council react to Haku and Kimimaro's presence ? And Danzo ?
3 - Isn't graduation between 12 and 13y old in canon ?
4 - "Flying Thunder God" is a sealing technique, not a jutsu. Thus, there is no "screaming the technique". Besides, it is supposed to be the pinnacle of fuinjutsu, no way your character could reproduce it so easily.
5 - By the way, regarding fuinjutsu, why not introduce your OC to the art in a more believable way ? He could have found notes in Orochimaru's lair and copied them with his sharingan and then started practicing the basics (because "copying" doesn't mean "understanding"). Then, in Konoha, he would have found more serious textbooks in the library thanks to an OC librarian who would have lamented that no one was interested in the art anymore. Overtime, he would prove his genius in the art, the librarian would let him access to higher level manuals and even the hokage would have been notified and, to cultivate this talent which is rare in Konoha, would have given him access to other more exotic sources. At the end of these four years, he would have reached such a level that "finally", he would have managed to reproduce his own version of the Flying thunder god by comparing the notes of the 2nd and 4th generously lent by the Hokage (who did not think that he would manage to reproduce the feat of these two geniuses).
Pxl158 chapter 1 . 1/13
Nice story
Guest chapter 7 . 12/17/2022
Mmm should Lord third die or not huh? ... Pathetic. Yeah time to flying thunder god the fuck outta here...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/16/2022
Yor trying way to hard to make him unnecessarily powerful. A reccuring issue with fanfics like this. It's honestly tiring and I'm profoundly disappointed that you plagued this fic with it. I hope you've learned to do better nowadays.
BigDickWilly chapter 1 . 10/22/2022
Great story
Ur mom chapter 1 . 10/4/2022
Nice nice good start please make him a bounty hunter/mercenary and not affiliated to any where and be his own group hauk being the speed and healer of course kage level power but not anything more than that like A's level he is an avg kage so ya as strong as A the 4th rikage kimimoro can be a beast like sasuke and the main protagonist can be like natuto lvl and yea o shit fuck this is a finished story fuckme
Space King Wizard Duck chapter 1 . 9/17/2022
White hair and special eyes he has to keep covered all the time? You Gojo motherfucker, lmao.
mauricemattis17 chapter 23 . 8/16/2022
Just a bad very fucking stupid story
201.00010.11.0029 chapter 54 . 7/30/2022
He's so PERFECT. FLYING THUNDER GOD JUTSU, MANGEKYOU SHARINGAN, WOOD STYLE. he should have become the First God of Shonobi. He is probably like the strongest Shonobi.
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