Tank you!

Its been a few hears now a d im still craving adventurous tales with my stiill-fave team! Ive just reread this one and absolutely love the adventure you put John and Rodney on! You are a fantastic story teller and did my fave show new life—only wish you would continue adventure stories like this one though it looks like youve moved on or in a direction I dont care for…..anyway—thankyou for another great read! Best wishes!

good story... I like the idea of teh ancient city and I really love the John/queen part

A very enjoyable story. Thank you.

I loved this...sad it's finished...i want more . Well done. P

You're a masterful storyteller, I just wish you were still writing SGA stories, I've loved reading most of your stories.

Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it immensely!

Wow, I’m so glad I found someone who is still writing good, well plotted Atlantis stories. Really liked your secondary characters especially little Net. Even the cities had flavorsso original. I’m so sorry to read that you are ill and pray that you have some great doctors and nurses caring for you (my mom was in the City of Hope so I know they’re out there). Best wishes for a better New Year, I’m off to read another story.

Somebody recently posted on Twitter a question asking which cancelled TV show you'd most like to see brought back, and why. And I said Stargate Atlantis -because of this story.

This would have made a *fantastic* episode. Or probably more than one. Absolutely loved the different settings, the "Will they escape? And how?" suspense and - as always - the interplay between Rodney and John!

Oh wow. What a journey...I'm surprised to say that I've got tears in my eyes as I type this review. The absolute sense of satisfaction has made my heart feel so full as to overflow with emotions. Thank you so much for the time and effort that you obviously put into your creations. I look forward to devouring the rest of your works!

This was a really good story and you tried up all the loose ends. Apart from syntax errors in sentence structure, you did an excellent job with this story and I'll be happy to add it to my favorites.

Great, great story. love your writing style!

Thank you so much for sharing this awesomeness with us!
This story hooked me right from the start and I felt like I was sharing John and Rodney's journey with them. All the highs and lows and moments of friendship and fears and even tears.
The characters they met along the way became my friends too (not Lady Tarva she was mean to John), and I wanted happy endings for them too - which mostly happened.
I loved Rodney and Net together and had mixed feelings when she returned home (even though that's where she really belonged).
I found the 'situation' with V'stet extremely amusing (and hot) and don't think it's a discussion John and Rodney will ever have lol.
I enjoyed the ride immensely and think you are a wonderful story teller and thank you again for giving me a few hours of immersive happiness.

Really loved this story from beginning to end. So much going on for John and Rodney during their difficult journey home. I don't normally like Rodney heavy stories but you made this one enjoyable because of his interaction with Net. He seemed more human and less I'm a genius. You had John's character down to a tee. I'm not injured and let me protect you. Perfect. Thanks for writing and hope you continue to bring SGA back to life.

You have a gift for storytelling. Thank you for sharing your story with me. I couldn't hardly put it down.