Reviews for To Play a Game |
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Vu1kan18 chapter 1 . 11/22/2023 love this so far keep writing friend |
PrimeX chapter 1 . 11/21/2023 Wtf was that guest going on about? |
niggers hater chapter 1 . 7/16/2023 Fuck pussy nigger! That's how you think like a real black-skin? you're going to prostrate and beg to your mighty masters and kiss our foot like stray dog Trying to beg to got a house. Good, I can feel your lust. I am pantsless. Take your dick. Strike me down with all of your lust and your journey towards the bitch side will be complete! |
quaker212 chapter 1 . 5/18/2023 Hmm, a new spin on this idea. I like it so far. |
Gemini-Spark chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 please do not change anything about Hazard King it's great as it is do not be like Fairy Tail Dragon Slayer who never completes his old storys and always makes new ones he is not a bad writer and i do not hate him in fact i love his storys but he never finishes them anyway back to you please before you make 30 new storys complete some of you old ones |
Valentin the Pretender chapter 1 . 10/4/2019 Pretty good thus far. Looking forward to the next one, mate. |
Makurayami chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 um... you do realize that there' already a gamer!Jaune fic with this exact title? you're opening yourself to accusations of plagiarism |
Calamk chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 I don't see a poll so I'll put my vote in for Pyrrha. |
alvaraiz chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 interesting story, a breeze of fresh air with the thematic gamer, better still knowing that there will not be long wills of statistics that eventually do not meet great impact on the plot or ridiculously powerful magical attacks. I've also thought about creating my own gamer story of rwby with jaune of a different protagonist than the others on the site ... unfortunately, the fandom in Spanish (my mother tongue) is so small that it doesn't seem worth the effort. Anyway, I got distracted enough. In the first part I really don't have much to say, it wasn't bad but for some reason, I felt that the thing was really lacking, it wasn't boring but I don't know ... I don't capture my interest. The next part with the gods and the first touches of the game mechanics was really good and interesting and I wish it was longer, I will be waiting for the continuation. As for the routes, check the survey and I hope it doesn't win ruby since as you said, it will be the shortest and the lancaster is my favorite ship not to mention that argumentatively speaking, pyrrha would make more sense with everything that was in the air between they. Well, it would be all, I'll be waiting for the next chapter anxious. |
TheGenesis chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 I very like. Great job. |
Wolfe472 chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 I will be the first to admit that I honestly like Gamer fics quite a bit, and I do wish to see how exactly you are going to spin it. Good luck. |
death'sgodson1224-DGS chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 Uou've caught my interest... |
IunctusCorde chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 For An introduction. Pretty good. Look forward to further shenanigans |
Siegnir chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 this is interesting, it is the first time i have seen an idea like this so i cant wait to see more of this story, i agree with you on the character of jaune i feel like he can be more in the series with all that he has been improving, but welp |
janed12000 chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 Seems like a very ambitious story. I love the multiple playthrough idea but it seems like it would be very hard to finish. Looking forward to reading it though! |