Very good story. Just binged it over a couple nights. I do think some events feel a tiny bit forced for plot convenience, mostly Mob fighting the Nomu and Twice's clones and him being out of energy right once he landed for the Stain battle, but generally speaking most of the changes are reasonable, and the forced ones are pretty understandable too since otherwise the story would change rather drastically.

That aside, I do like the themes and narrative of the fanfic and I imagine it could continue very well. I hope you're planning on continuing this, it's been a while since the last chapter.

If I had to make one nitpick, I do think that ?% Kageyama straight-up killing 53 people is a bit much. Not necessarily because it's unrealistic, but because making Kageyama a mass murderer, accidental or not, makes the inevitable redemption of his character harder to believe or digest. From the perspective of the reader it doesn't matter because it's just some numbers and words, but from the perspective of characters in the story, Kageyama took away 53 lives. That's not something you can just casually go "Sorry it was an accident we all good now tho lol", Kageyama himself would never, ever be able to go on, he would never be allowed to become a Hero, and he would be hated. The characters barely even acknowledge that fact when it is by far the worst thing without comparison. I'd recommend omitting that and changing it to 53 severely injured, 100 moderately injured. That's just my suggestion though! Fun read. 8/10.

Man, I've started reading this fryday and I alredy finished it. What a great story
best moments in my opinion:
- The entire first arc (chapter 1-USJ aftermath)
- ALL and I mean ALL the moments between Shigeo and Momo
- And last but not least "You are INVINCIBLE Shigeo Kageyama"

Hope you update soon

Я так сильно жду 46 главу ! Прочитала этот фанфик за раз, и не могу описать словами как это классно ! Персонажи в этой истории не потеряли свой характер , а их постепенно меняли из-за введения в их жизнь такого персонажа как Моб . В этой истории главный герой такой... такой живой ! Его слова и действия вдохновляют не только персонажей этой истории , но и читателей, и меня в том числе !

Awesome Mob, he doesn't need to break your face with punches, but turbo destroys the coldest heart and in the process he tells you without mincing words the mistakes and with examples just by talking, I absolutely love the chapters where the son of Saitama destroys people with bad intentions with his speech

I loved the chapter

"...having to lick his fingers to get all the dried blood off."

... What!?

Thats a helluva typo, definitely needs fixing.

I think the accident that Mob caused gives rise to people starting to have negative opinions of him. I saw somewhere that they treated Mob like a messiah, and the truth is, I agree

M3 encanto este gigante
Hace más de 15 años que no vengo a
Pero me hiciste volver
Esperare el próximo capitulo con ansias
Espero que mob pueda ser libre pronto

out of curiousity will you ever go back to your gow and chainsaw man fanfic

Keep it up I love this story please.

I was actually hoping to see Shinso go up against Mob. I mean, it'd be a overwhelming victory for Mob, but this fight would be more for how Mob interacts with mental Quirks like Shinso's. Would they be like ordinary psychic powers or are they different? Potentially in the future.

I understand not agreeing with Mob being a Messiah but almost everytime any character talk about him its full of praise. It feels like every character he leaves a positive impact on practically worships him. Having him help everybody in everyday possible and then having those characters sing praise about him naturally leads the readers to feel like he is perfect in a lot of ways.

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dude, when's the next chapter coming?

Thanks for the chapter