if momomob is endgame im killing myself

when ever i am writing my own fanfiction (i Don't upload it because I am shy) i always lower it from 20% to 2%

I mean this in the nicest way possible but you suck at writing fight scenes for mob lol. So we just spent his entire internship with hawks learning how to fight at fast speeds and nothing, nada, zilch. Even without being at 100%, that should have been a fight that ended within a min since the nomu was weaker than the one at usj. I understand using different abilities in fights to make it more interesting for the viewer but only if there is a reason for it. Second i think you are seriously underestimating the power of speed. I mean no disrespect for endeavor, but he would get smacked a hundred times before he even registers mob attacking him. That's how big the speed difference you have created. So yes, mob is stronger(should be at least) in his base form. I never really thought mirko was that strong. I know she's amazingly strong but i view mobs base form as easily stronger and he can definitely fly faster than she can run. Should have been an easy win, low diff.

Mmm. I hope Mob will be able to establish some individual friendships. What he has with Midoriya’s friend group seems nice and all, but I can’t help but feel that he’s almost a silent fourth wheel to them. A sort of “friends with Midoriya, sort of friends with you by association” deal. So hopefully, he can become friends with people outside the group. Kirishima is a good start! Mob will probably be reminded a bit about the body improvement club. Sato too, he’s a nice guy. Koda too, and even Todoroki eventually due to the parallels of not wanting to use their powers. Lots of fun connections to be had.

Oh god. Of course. Mob will always, without fail, get a crush on the “popular girl,” huh?

Honestly, I’m just curious to see how Shigeo will mesh with the members of Class 1-A. He sees the best in people, so I’m curious to know what the interactions between characters like him and Iida, Bakugo, Todoroki, and even Mineta will be like. I’m really excited for that. The next Explosion too! Or even him using ?%! There’s a lot to look forward to in my opinion.

Is this the all might after mob has been giving him psychic energy to increase his time and his power level so he is back to what he once was? Im going to assume so

This chapter took me almost 2 hrs to read. not because it was an extremely long chapter, but because i was forced to stop at the insanity the fight brought over and over again. Can you please, for the love of god, not mention that mob is trying his hardest when he is clearly not? I dont know if you were just plugging in random numbers because they looked cool in the past but werent actually paying attention to what they mean, but you said mob did the 50m dash in .02 seconds, you also said he wasnt even trying, not to mention the fact he wasnt anywhere close to 100% in emotional power or whatever. That would mean that he has the ability to travel faster than 5000mph without even trying if you do the math. Even in the obstacle course, he finished in 20 seconds for a 4km distance, the math would say he was going at least 700mph, and since he slowed down for the robots, he was probably going at several thousands mph when actually moving. So by that logic, his speed is incomparable with todoroki, he cant escape at all if he was actually trying his all. Dont say that, because you are either buffing someone or nerfing them. Also, i dont understand the telekinetic blasts? Cant he just wrap his telekinetic energy around his opponents like what he did with bakugo and just force them out of the ring? Or is that something only he can do at 100%, so fucking stupid. I understand building character growth for mob, but dont just nerf him for it, or at least write it better by him not giving it his all. Do you remember the deku and bakugo fight from canon later in the series? Bakugo barely won with midoriya only using 5%. He shouldnt have to be 100% in any of these fights to slaughter them if he felt it. He could use 15% of his total strength and speed and easily be 10x faster than todoroki at flying and could treat bakugo like how an adult treats a kid. Going into 100% is just overkill at this point unless he just wants to release some steam, because he never would need it. Also, this is just a grammatical error that ive noticed that you have been doing recently, but whenever you were talking about todoroki's mother or even dekus mother in past chapters, you are saying "her mother" while it should be "his mother" since we are talking about deku or todoroki which are both males. Anyway, im sorry for the long post but reading the last couple of chapters brought me to 100% RAGE and i just had to post. PS dont nerf mob and change how you write the fight scenes since clearly he isnt going all out or the fight would have been over instantly

Well, if we are going with with canon nomu then no, nomu doesnt have strength similar to all might. If he did he would have killed all might, the only reason why all might won was because he just turned it into a straight up punch for punch fight and relied on his superior strength to completely negate his shock absorption and healing. I mean think about it? All might didnt do anything special in that fight, if his physical strength didnt absolutely overwhelm the nomu then he wouldnt have won in the first place. It's just logical, im not saying the nomu isnt strong but if he had the same strength as what you are saying then there's 0 chance for AM. Which would actually make shigarakis statement about the nomu being the perfect weapon to defeat AM. But since this is technically an AU, i dont mind you saying nomu has the same strength as AM. That would just mean that mob, while still holding back his powers, is completely overwhelming the nomu and is technically now stronger and would have kicked AM ass if they ever gotten into a fight. At least the current weakened version of AM. I just hope you dont nerf mob, that is a quick way to lose any fan. I used to read a one punch manxmha ff and the author decided to nerf OPM, like wtf?

You know, you gotta feel for mob, he has the mindset that his abilities arent everything and while that is true, that is the first thing that he'll be judged by. Add to the fact that he isnt a fan of people who are so obsessed with people with abilities and making such a big deal out of them, if he ever grows individually, i dont see much of a relationship with midoriya. Midoriya only cares about quirks, he didnt work on any self growth for the first 15 years of his life. i wouldnt be surprised if the main reason why he is friends with mob is because of his ability. I mean look at the person he respected most and looks up to most? Allmight and bakugo, both are powerful just one is reachable while the other was like a celebrity. I mean he did anything to be close to a bully and put up with it just because he had a powerful quirk. It's pathetic. You are going to tell me he couldnt forget about him and try to find other quirkless kids in his school or people who didnt have good quirks? Sooner or later mob will find out the type of person deku is when he consistently sees the fanaticism over someone who he should be disgusted just to be around

This world needs the Chad Reigen so badly.

Its been a while since we've seen mobs' original world's pov. Wonderjng how much his brother and the others have trained so far

I loved! One of the best crossovers I've ever read, I don't know why I didn't get the notification

this is still one of my top fanfics i look forward to reading :D

Aaawwww the feels of the sad fluff pls keep updateing luv the work