Reviews for The Pack Survives |
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![]() ![]() Well that was probably the mostt brain dead thing that's ever happened. Brain dead. No wonder you abandoned this brain dead story |
![]() ![]() Imagine being so idiotic you can't spell "should've" or any other 've. What a joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While Ned have a good reason to dislike Jamie, seeing that he saw the future, he should be able to tell there is more to him than meets the eye and he can be a valuable alley in the great war to come ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get it, taking Tyrion has no really great benefit, it just ignite a bloody war that that will bring no benefit since the Northern army won't have a cause to march South unless Ned himself die or get imprisoned, it just seems pointless |
![]() ![]() ![]() While it is true that the story of Lyanna is heartbreaking, RhaegarRhaegarwas kinda foolish in his actions ! He was already married and had 2 children, setting his eyes on a teenage girl how is betrothed to a great lord isn't what someone would consider wisdom. Lyanna might have went with it because she was a teenager who didn't know any better and thought this might be a chance for happiness for her but Rhaegar knew full well what he is getting into and yet he set aside his wife for another one ! Heck, none of his gaurds even even voiced concern or worry about what this can lead too ! I am just saying it might be a tragic story on Lyanna's part but way less on Rhaegar's part ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ned seems to have played the game better than everyone ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Hope you continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this non-stop since yesterday. It’s a good story and I really love it when the North pulls off such a good joke on the South and they don’t see it coming. You’ve written a very good story. It was a little confusing with the different perspectives, but it did help with moving the timeline along and not having to waste time showing the flow of time while also making it seem feasible. I really hope you continue this. |
![]() ![]() now wait a damn minute lmfaoooo this means that Ned misses the most crucial thing ever. he's going to instigate the whole war of the 5 kings because he still believes Baelish's lies and he didnt even believe Cat above all things. he still thinks that it was tyrion, whom doesnt even care about a feud between their families, whatver that was! |
![]() ![]() then everything happens still does it not? surely, baelish would want the catspaw to say that it was a lannister that wanted little bran to die. intersting, one increasing force is being humbled and balanced by the gods. surely, they wanted the greater good for planetos? then why are still playing the game of thrones as it should have been played when ned first died? |
![]() ![]() the change in the rhetoric was that King Aerys wanted her dead such that Rhaegar would find Lyanna and "kidnap" her. all miscommunication, but all falls to the folly of rhaegar. if he was just satisfied with his get, his life and family legacy would still be secure with little Aegon, placated the lords and ladies of his father's crimes. instead he fell in love with lyanna, a girl barely past her teens and knew wanted a third head. gods what an idiot he was. but sure i can accept this change as well as ned wanting Jon as king, it would still be legit since the North is the power in the kingdoms now. though im curious how House Lannister reacted to their reach to glory and riches lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is incredible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with Jaime, all the KG were trash during the Rebellion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a very enjoyable ending to the chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why'd Ned randomly throw away millions to pay off Roberts debts, but not spend some extra on a ship to get his family out of Kingslanding? Actually why should he have paid the tourney and debt at all? |