Reviews for Naruto Rose the Champion of Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon, please |
![]() ![]() Gran historia estuvo genial espero el próximo capitulo |
![]() ![]() J'adore cette histoire pour quand la mise à jour |
![]() ![]() ![]() More plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come on, you gotta continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() …why not kick the Dust crystal away? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouldn't it make more sense to make Ruby the leader exactly BECAUSE she idolizes him? Giving her a leadership position sounds like a way to incentive her to develop a higher independence and self esteem, having too high an opinion of Naruto could very easily lead into an inferiority complex and be a serious problem. Surprised Ozpin didn't use that reasoning in the meeting at the office end, sounds like something he'd say considering it's very similar to his whole point about not making Weiss the leader in canon, and more importantly, it's exactly the same thing he did with Jaune. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AN3 Because the more you change him the less 'Naruto' he becomes, there's literally nothing left of the original Naruto anymore besides his first name, he's just an OC at this point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to write 'eb' more often than 'be' in this and other novels of yours, such novice errors would easily be corrected with a simple spellchecking program so it seems rather lazy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more give me more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Va a ver nuevo cap?, aun no pierdo oa esperanza... pero ha pasado ya una eternidad |
![]() ![]() Hey there Hope to see updates on this fic Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() He shouldn't have told Qrow the truth. Despite loving his family and having best intention, he is an Ozpin loyalist and Ozpin won't hesitate from manipulating him and others to get along with his thousands of years of couple fighting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you continue this or put it up for adoption, the only thing you need is some editing to fix minor errors like drily it's dryly for example, but other than that it's a good story |