Reviews for Naruto Rose the Champion of Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story cant wait to see where you go with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Narutos semblance should be telekinesis. Like the force from Star Wars. Force push, pull, choke, etc. Narutos weapon should be some type of sword. He’s a close ranged fighter Anyways just a little rant right here. What would happen when naruto dies in this life. Is he going to heaven and going to remember all his friends and family from his old life? Or is he going to forget them and only remember the family and friends he makes this life. Naruto said it himself he wants to see his family and Friends. Is he going to have 2 moms and dads in heaven. I wouldn’t accept that if I was going to be reincarnated to a different family and forget everyone in my old life. Anyways I would just have naruto teleported there at a young age with no chakra but aura and a semblance and adopted by the rose family |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesante |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve been looking for a reincarnation story like this I’m so glad you decided to make this story, I’m really interested. I hope you will be determined to see this story through and finish it make sure to take your time and don’t rush things you eventually will have people who will love and support you no matter what you do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() use the kamen rider gaim sword gun it a cool wepion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() for semblance mokuton for weapon maybe dragon blade from naruto shipuden dragon blade chronicles games it has everything to use dust in the blade |
![]() ![]() ![]() make his Semblance the Truth-Seeking Balls or give him Mokuton. The Balls because of his connection to Asura and his most powerful form. The Mokuton because again his connection to Asura and as well as Hashirama. Also because there isn't a lot of stories out there with him having Mokuton. For weapons, I don't really care all that much |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks like it will a very interesting story. I’ve not seen many stories using this premise and the few that did ended up going in a direction I didn’t care for. Definitely got a follow and favorite from me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() semblance...some kind of cloning or elemental manipulation, weapons...the ff7 advent children buster sword, the MAW from splinter cell and assassins creed hidden blades(ezio era on) update soon, ttfn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story have merits, it has a good start...but I do not like Naruto without Chakra, why not make Chakra his semblance without the hand seals. Or give Naruto all the Nature powers, Lightning, Fire, Earth, Water and the Sub nature powers, Ice, Weather, Wood etc. It sounds overpowered, which I like, however, it will give Naruto the tip to change the war... also, it makes him special, someone worthy of a Champion of the God of Light. Salem is all about Destruction, Death...the End. While Naruto will be the opposite, a force of Nature, an impregnable wall... Life, because Elements are forces of Life and Chaos. This will also launch Naruto into the level of his previous life, someone with the strength of worthy of being a past Kage. About his Weapon, I'm sorry this came from World of Warcraft... Varian Wrynn sword, which is called Shalamayne. Shalamayne has a unique narrow edge at the point and a thicker, angled edge further down. The hollow in the lower part of the blade glow like a sun. There is a backward arch at the bottom of the blade, and the hilt is long and slender. It is especially that glowing sun in the lower part that spoke to me. Naruto being a warrior of Light, that glowing sun could be his symbol. But back to his powers, if there is one... Make it Mokuton. Asura got Mokuton, Hashirama got Mokuton but Naruto is almost a reincarnation of them, yet he didn't get Mokuton while Sasuke... the bitch got his Sharingan just like his Madara and the brother of Asura, I believe that it will be justice to give Naruto mokuton if there was ever a power for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, can't wait for more. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo! So I like the idea of the story, especially the part where Naruto is part of the Rose family. I'll follow the story because I'm excited to see where it goes, keep up the good work! Also, maybe see where you can put commas? Usually I put the things I write through a spell checker so it adds punctuation where I missed it before. Anyway it's just a though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know about his semblance but his weapon should be a staff like the one he uses with the truth seeking orbs that turns into a sniper or rifle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() kings avatar's transforming weapon |